Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?
-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away.
-Wait until the class or meeting is over and the people are gone, and then talk to the teacher or meeting leade.
-Say nothing.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, human beings have perpetually been concerned about how to behave well with other persons. Such a constant effort has become even more noticeable it the modern era where people`s behavior has inevitable impact on their behavior. In this regard, there has been a longstanding controversy among academicians as to whether people should correct other people`s mistakes in the meetings or classrooms or not. I personally believe that in this situation we should say noting to professors or group leaders. In what follows, I will elaborate on my viewpoint.
The most important reason to be mentioned here is that if we want to correct their mistakes they may think we want to criticism them. These cause them to teachers or bosses behave badly and even they can cause lots of problems for student or employee who speaks about their mistakes. So, it is better for us to do not speak about the problems of the people who supervise our work. For instance, if our teachers or bosses make a mistake in their presentation they should move our head and praise their precious notes.
The other important reason crossing my mind now is that if we correct their mistake, we may cause them to feel bad about their self, and moreover, it can reduce their self-confidence. All human beings make lots of mistake in their life because they do not pay enough heed to their jobs. So, we should not speaks about people`s problems because it can cause them to feel digested and even live their job. To illustrate, I would like to mention some available statistics about this point. The result of the survey conducted recently in my country clearly depicts that more than 56 percent of people thinks if some people how work for them remained them about their mistakes they will be sad.
The last but not the least reason by which claim is justified is that all people have lots of problems in their own life and it is better for them to focus on their own mistake instead of squandering their time on other people`s problems. Undoubtedly, nowadays, life places us in a complex web of relationships with other people. So, if we want to correct all people`s mistakes we should spend all of our times on it. Take a personal experience as an example. I used to study in one of the best university of my country as a mechanical students. In just one day, I recorded more than 10 mistakes among my professors` points. So, if I wanted to correct them, I should have canceled my all programs and spent a complete week in the university.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely reach the conclusion that people should not speak about their teachers or their bosses` problems because they may think they want to criticize them, and moreover, it can cause them to feel unhappy. Furthermore, I argued that we should spend our time for our benefits and we should not squander our precious time on other people`s mistake. All in all, it is anticipated that in future people will pay more heed to their own life and spend most of their time on improving their own performance instead of wasting their time and money on other people’s problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...standing controversy among academicians as to whether people should correct other people&apos...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun mistake seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of mistakes'.
Suggestion: lots of mistakes
... self-confidence. All human beings make lots of mistake in their life because they do not pay e...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'speak'
Suggestion: speak
...h heed to their jobs. So, we should not speaks about people's problems because it...
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Line 4, column 546, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
Suggestion: student
...niversity of my country as a mechanical students. In just one day, I recorded more than ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202229299363 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.144904458599 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0668789808917 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0541401273885 0.046263068375 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.127388535032 0.0685040099705 186% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.127388535032 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0238853503185 0.0351676179071 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73784973688 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031847133758 0.0309702414327 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0541401273885 0.0887237588012 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0334394904459 0.0209618222197 160% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0127388535032 0.0139019557991 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3180.0 2387.08602151 133% => OK
No of words: 549.0 408.028673835 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79234972678 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311475409836 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224043715847 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174863387978 0.174417080927 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105646630237 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73784973688 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424408014572 0.524397521467 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.5157108644 59.2087087015 84% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 22.875 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2330066924 48.84282405 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 120.699889404 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.644075263715 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 45.2793715847 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.08292682927 1.45489161554 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252964725325 0.300154397459 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105943229469 0.103427244359 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.06376867603 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468050769061 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140631100689 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985048922493 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714480497416 0.0781384742642 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.42172050734 0.336927656856 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.118426480781 0.067059652881 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192581666206 0.210909579961 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449478803278 0.0618886996521 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.86379928315 336% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 12.0 2.4623655914 487% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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