Imagine that your city government has given permission for a major company to build a large factory near your neighborhood. Do you think this is a good idea? Why or why not? Explain your position using specific reasons and examples.
The presence of factories near residential zones is a controversial subject as a society always concerned about. Some people may think that this idea can create lot of pollution problems. Stand on the other side o9f the continuum, I personally support the construction of industrial firms near my town for three reasons, which I will elaborate on them from hereunder.
To begin with, my hometown desperately needs lot of job opportunities as it is located far away from developed cities. People have to travel a long distance to reach the city to engage in their works. However, their daily wages is negligible when compared with the travel expenses. Therefore, if a factory in their hometown have a lot of advantages like less transportation expenditure, more job vacancies...etc. Moreover, those who are unemployed are engaged in crimes, sexual abuse, and child labor which cannot be acceptable to any society. With the advent of a company, all the above-mentioned problems can be solved. Like for example, my brother who is a resident of the town got a good profession and he is well satisfied with his new company job than the earlier one which is 50 miles away from his house. This illustrates the high quality of living of the local people with the new mission implemented by the government in their town.
Next, the modern industry is not as bad as a lot of people think. It consists of sophisticated technologies to control pollution and other potential threats that can affect its neighborhoods. The powerful, most modern machines emit very less poisonous gases plus they have very little sound. Furthermore, the machinery have filters to excavate and drain the harmful byproducts from companies that are toxic to the town. Hence, these industries have little air and noise pollution to the surroundings. On top of that, governments assigned special professionals to figure out any fail of their regulations by the company. They are always in contact with the locality for experiencing any inconveniences for their livelihood. As per the above-mentioned example, from my brother's company, they are noticing very little pollution and everyone agrees with the fact that with the construction of the new firm, its benefits overweigh its disadvantages.
Finally, this can raise the reputation of an unfamiliar village to the new world. The new factory provides indelible changes in the town like it reduces crime rates, graffiti, and homelessness. Sometimes other companies are also attracted to the town by seeing the merits for both the people and for the firm. Eventually, the town can be transformed into an industrial avenue, that has a tremendous impact on public transportation, economy, and job vacancies in the area.
All in all, with all the reasons into account, I vehemently assert that building a new factory in your local town is better, not only do provide lot of job opportunities and raise the reputation of the village but also factories are not as dirty and inconvenient as many people think.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2533.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10685483871 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04278626008 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524193548387 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 799.2 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4950320714 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.541666667 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45833333333 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109473771862 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290763616478 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325428180725 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721987603141 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381223406998 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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