knowledge is one of the fundamental needs for everyone. there are many perspectives about the source of the knowledge, i will clarify that in the body of this essay.
Initially, in many ways experiences are very essential on our live. However,with out experiences we can't know the pros and cons for many things. For instance, there are many professions we can't practice if we just focus in the theoretical concept with out the practical side. By way of illustration, been a doctor by reading books or been an accountant with out applied the financial standers can not let you excel and master your profession, in the reality, we learn many things as how to be a confident and how to be more independent in our live also how to make friends and solve problems only by experiences. Knowledge gained from Experiences with out monopolize in contrary with books the best books are unreachable or cost more. Experiences come from the real live and we don't have to spend more time in reading or learning many knowledge we don't need it on the real live.
moreover, experiences is very essential to obtain knowledge. In the other hand, books are very reliable and significant source to gain knowledge. How not, all the experiences from the ancient period moved to us through books. Such, the practical time for many culture in the past and the medical therapy and descriptions..thus. Also many theories that scientist discovered long time ago have been recorded in books and play a big role in the enormous development today. There are many aspect books can be enough to cover the need of the knowledge such as literature and poetry.
In conclusion,gained knowledge from books and experiences can't be separated in my opinion for many reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88851351351 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94554105512 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52027027027 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1202648097 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4666666667 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20813729218 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777539475445 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686565502908 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13884048791 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512583468757 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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