Without any shadow of doubt, the events which are happening around the world have profound impacts in our society. Nowadays, thanks to globalization, all nations are inextricably link to each other, either directly or indirectly. By considering this axiomatic fact, there is heated controversy among people. Some of them believe that, It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect their daily life. On the other hand, many believe otherwise and consider this issue as wasting time and energy. I, for one, incline to latter group on account of some conspicuous reasons which are elaborated on hereunder:
First and foremost, we should consider the importance of time in our hectic life. Nowadays, Most of the people claim that time is gold, in term of value. On the other hand, Being cognizant of the all events which are happening around us, whether important or not, requires a great deal of time. Time is the most valuable asset that anyone can have and wasting time on such valueless issues is not sensible. Instead of allocation of our precious time on insignificant news and events, we can organize them on our crucial aspects of life, take for instance, for our family, study and even society, to name but a few.
Furthermore, Most of our people are have a busy life. Majority of people, working from dawn to dusk, in order to make ends meet. It is crystal clear that, this type of life, put a great psychological pressure on people. We should endeavor to relieve this tension and this matter is impossible by being aware about the world's happening since, War, casualties, bloodshedding, famine and so on are indelible part of our world's events. It does not stand to reason to spend many hours a day to ruin your life comfort and peace for such events.
Last but not least, awareness of the events around the world will sidetrack and mislead you from your own route. Take for instance, being engineer is your goal and you are study hard and trying your best to reach this goal. By reading the news and event about recession in somewhere in world, like bankruptcy of manufacturing factories, you will be despaired of your notion of being engineer and you will suppose that, you will not flourish in engineering field, yet this perception is not true at all.
In a nutshell, grounded on the arguments which are stated above, I subscribe to the idea that knowing about all events without considering its influence in your life , is wasting the time. We can expend the time and energy, which is wasted by news and events, on another aspects of life.
- Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. 88
- It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 70
- Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking website. 70
- Agree or disagree?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. 90
- Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking website. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'linked'.
Suggestion: linked
...alization, all nations are inextricably link to each other, either directly or indir...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...w. Furthermore, Most of our people are have a busy life. Majority of people, workin...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t considering its influence in your life , is wasting the time. We can expend the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, even so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78587196468 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54058252541 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507726269316 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4785578782 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.65 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354375732352 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101842965402 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155305164141 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184914277551 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885814342366 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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