We are in day and age, where is the work is very important for the person and to create a significant amount of skills, to live in this competitive world. Some groups prefer to work in a team whereas, the others prefer the individuals work. I think the work in a group is better, because of some reasons I will talk about them.
First and foremost, teamwork can help people to earn more skills from his/her partner. And because people are different one to another, so, it is great and important to earn the new skills maybe it will help you to succeed in the future.
And I know people, who are the family's friends, who always prefer to work alone but in some subject, they were forced to work in a team. And after that, they noticed that they learned new skills that helped him/her.
In the second place, group work can finish the work in a specific time, that because of the work will be distributed equally on the group members. And each person will help the other, I remembered my projects on the 11th grade, one of them was in chemistry class, I was in a group, so, I had finished my work quickly and without any problem and I helped my friends on their work. Whereas in the second project, which was on Religion class, I was alone to do it, so, I had taken two weeks to complete it, with its research and powerpoint view.
On the other hand, the individual's work will reduce communication with other people, and it will be okay to be alone, and that because of there is no person to talk with and you must work to complete it in the time.
At the end of this argument, I am convinced, that teamwork is more useful and because it is popular in my country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, whereas, i think, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33121019108 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30786929878 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474522292994 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.468202635 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307568041494 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116501722131 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828487143145 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143547748427 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651219318495 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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