Friendship is one of the most beautiful relationships in the world. A good friend is a treasure in one's life. People start to make friends from their school life. And as the time flies, they meet new people in colleges or universities and make new friends. Though it is important to make new friends when you go to a new place but it is always important to keep your old friends closer.
First of all, in most of the cases old friends are the school or childhood friends in a person's life. They know us from the very beginning of our lives. They become our friends when we do not make friendship for purpose. We just become friends from the deep of our heart. But when we grow up and makes friends, we know that we need them for help and to survive. For instance, when I was in college, I did not have any of my old friends in the same college. I saw everyone was busy with themeselves. Everyone was self-centered. I started to makes friends when a professor gave a group project and we had to work together. We became close because we needed one another's help. Therefore, old friends are selfless. The friendship with old freinds is pure.
Secondly, old friends understand our feelings, behavior, attitude, likes-dislikes so well that no one else can do. As they know from the very begining of our life, they know our good and bad sites. They do not judge us as any other person does. Therefore, we are more free and open to our old friends than to new friends. That is one another reason to keep our old friends around us.
Thirdly, Old friends are always ready to support you and sacrifice anything for the good of your sake. It characteristics is rare in a new friend.
I had an real example of this sitation in my life. During my college life I was having some financial problems. So I asked help from one of my college friend but she was hesitating to help me. But when I asked one of my old friends, she sid not think twice and was ready to help me.
For all those given reasons above, I prefer to keep my old friends rather than making new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38181818182 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4701366982 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457142857143 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0997810935 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.1724137931 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.275862069 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34482758621 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419231222501 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118650132797 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13088610448 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257381473304 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135127626949 0.0645574589148 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 11.7677419355 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.25 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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