It is indisputable that friends play a pivotal role in teaching and guidance of people and they will affect our individual’s lives in several aspects. Also, friends are one of the precious gifts in our life. Some people take the view that the quantity of friendship is more important than quality which means they're trying to expand our friendship by finding new friends. Nevertheless, some people contradict with this point of view. As far as I concerned I advocate of expanding the friendship. The number of benefits over this issue is overwhelming. I would explore some of the main benefits which are more conspicuous for me in following paragraphs.
First and foremost, expanding your friendship will provide you an opportunity to meet an inordinate number of people with different skill and expertise and even different culture and language which helps you to learn a lot of thing from them. One of my personal experience is a compelling example of this issue, I used to be sociable so I was easy for me to become a friend with someone so once I traveled to the USA I meet some guys who made my trip more enjoyable I also learned a lots of thing from them such as their native language. If I had confined my friendship to a small circle I wouldn’t have been a chance to meet those guys and learn that precious thing.
Another significant benefit should be mentioned is that although old fiends provide you more companionship and they are more supportive in time of crises but from my perspective, if you have a large circle of friends you won’t despair and sad from your life. The new friends are always willing to lend a hand in time of crises due to they want to gain your trust. For example, three years ago I had a terrible accident so I need a huge amount of money in order to fix my own car during this situation the only one helped me was my friend who had acquainted with him three days before the disaster.
Finally, confining your circle is unhealthy in term of social development, statistics show that the people who have more friends are more likely to prosper earlier in their life I used to be very shy and introvert although I had a lot so friends but they helped me to prevail over my shyness, therefore I became extrovert. Without their help, I couldn’t fulfill my expectation.
Due to the aforementioned reasons I have discussed above, I in favor of expanding my friend because more people will contribute more valuable things, we are easily influenced by our friends and they play a prominent role in our lives in several aspects.
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- TOEFL T P O 43 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...more important than quality which means theyre trying to expand our friendship by find...
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Line 1, column 440, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ple contradict with this point of view. As far as I concerned I advocate of expand...
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Line 1, column 574, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... issue is overwhelming. I would explore some of the main benefits which are more conspicuou...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...e and language which helps you to learn a lot of thing from them. One of my personal experienc...
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Line 2, column 481, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...e my trip more enjoyable I also learned a lots of thing from them such as their native...
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Line 2, column 483, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of things'.
Suggestion: lots of things
...my trip more enjoyable I also learned a lots of thing from them such as their native language...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68502202643 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80710172621 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495594713656 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.7194899885 48.9658058833 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.9375 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.375 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20403319743 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628049880517 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06424717036 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117177080191 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395984948722 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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