Friends are the closet to a family a person can have. The person that you interact or those who are close to you define you as a person. I personally believe in making new friends and interacting with fresh people. I will illustrate my points in the upcoming passages.
Firstly, I want to state that a person grows throughout his lifetime. A person never stops learning new things. There is always something new to learn and new friends offers quite different perspective than the current old friends. i will elaborate my point by stating a personal experience I work in the domain of computer science where technology is always on the rise. So i have colleagues who are currently working on a language named java. So while sitting in a bar i met a guy who recently joined our company he has a background of working in language python. This guy discussed with me the advantages of working in python and i absolutely loved his work . His works provoked keen interest to work in python. That is the reason i always love to meet new people and make new friends.
Secondly, Friends are like second family, In times of hardship if a friend a helps get out of misery. Also provides you with motivation and inspiration then that person is a true friend irrespective of the fact that the person is a new or recently met person. Furthermore to exemplify this reason i would like to add a personal touch. During school time I migrated from one school to another i recall the new students helped me to integrate in the classroom. None of old friends called me or even help me pass through difficult phase of my life. There is a saying which goes as "Friend in need is a friend indeed", A true friend's characteristics is not decided by the amount of time spend with the person but the quality of time spend with a person.
Finally, I want state that friendship is a bond which should be unbreakable for years to come. But this does not happen in most of the cases as the career paths of close ones are not similar if often leads to separation of friends. As time passes the pain passes began to subsidized also you meet people with similar viewpoints as yours and similar career trajectory. New friends also present you with different ideology which helps you get a more diverse opinion. In addition with this in times when you stuck in some life situation need help you need to be contact with your new friends as they will guide to a better solution.
In conclusion, A person should be open to having new friends also should try to hold on to old friends by being in contact with them. My point is demonstrated in the above passage with proper justification
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57202505219 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63216944216 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478079331942 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2581352725 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2307692308 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4230769231 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228814497813 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665838939397 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082103861578 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126664992796 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018063360212 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.