Nowadays, there are many types of jobs. For that reason many people consider what jobs are suitable for themselves. Among them, I think the high salary but less vacation is better than many vacations with low salary. I will tell you one big reason why I prefer that.
The biggest reason is that I can earn a lot of money very quickly. I will work hard when I am young and then when I become older I want to use that money to enjoy my life such as traveling and shopping. In fact, I will give one example for you. When my aunt was young, she worked really hard everyday.
She was always busy and very tired, however after twenty years, her life is so plentiful and relaxed, therefore, after I heard about this, I think I had to suffer while I am young to be happy later. Also, I want to suffer for a short time and enjoy my life.
These both all have pros and cons, so there is no answer. Although I think what I choose is very difficult, I think it is a kind of investment for my future. Hence I think the high salary but less vacation is more fit to me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...very quickly. I will work hard when I am young and then when I become older I wan...
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Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... aunt was young, she worked really hard everyday. She was always busy and very tired, h...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 159, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... is a kind of investment for my future. Hence I think the high salary but less vacati...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, really, so, then, therefore, while, i think, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 52.1666666667 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 1977.66487455 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1690821256 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11459600273 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599033816425 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9579400738 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3846153846 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20412080609 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707634431759 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144081617938 0.0737576698707 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114725155249 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114218389289 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 11.7677419355 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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