Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's hectic life it is an astonishing vast that people from all walks of life differ greatly in their attitudes towards this phenomenon. We find that some people hold the great idea that learning form past has a lot of advantages for living now, on the other hand others may have an opposite idea. From my perspective it is better to choose former. So, as Hollywood celebrities say:"Let's cut to the chase".
Taking the proposed subject into account the reason which may shed some light on my point is that we can diminish our faults. It goes without saying that there are people at different...
it is better to choose former
it is better to choose the former
flaws:
The second reason may not match the topic exactly. Don't forget that 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' are reasons that can be applied to all essay/speaking topics.
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