Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
The life situation adapted to the time that people live in. I think it is true to claim that life becomes easier and more comfortable in comparison with the past because of some reasons that I will mention.
The first reason is for the betterment of medicine situation in a modern life. The majority of the people died with light diseases. In fact, the lack of the knowledge and requirements drug let the diseases overwhelmed people. Also, another example of the absence of medicine science is dying of baby when they were born. On the contrary, today by the development of science and discovering of new and useful drug the number of the people that die from diseases reduces. So, the first difference of modern life is the advancement of the healthiness condition of people.
Secondly, the emergence of technology is one of the unique altered. Nowadays, the people lives completely depend on the technology such as cars, televisions, the internet, and the others. Each of them eases one part of humans’ lives. For instance, the car assists the people to transfer so readily, or the internet comforts the connection. Therefore, the technology makes a modern life completely unlike from the past because it reduces the problems such as transformation, connection, and the others that are a vital part of people's daily lives.
Finally, increases the job opportunity. By enhancement of education, the people’s knowledge and skills develop. Originally, these two cases are vital for finding a job. The most important part is, arising a new job such engineering or psychology and the others. Hence, by the development of people’s knowledge, the job occasion increases.
In conclusion, an invention such as technology tools and detection such as medicine and new drugs are the obvious arguments to prove this claim that new and modern life totally changes and makes more uncomplicated and convenience in comparison with our grandfather’s life.
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| 2018-09-21 | Barakatullah | 60 | view |
| 2018-09-21 | Barakatullah | 60 | view |
- It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. 65
- tpo25 3
- Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping to their communities? 66
- tpo 24 3
- Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18553459119 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05198845333 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 14.0 3.08781362007 453% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1736917203 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7894736842 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123170316556 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328611136052 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044146999657 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748029271779 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583539874268 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.