Development of countries results many cities with large population and crowded places and the other factors which are specific for these types of cities. Human being face suddenly with emerging cities and changing lifestyles and many facts which are undesirable or interesting. This makes people fan of giant environments or small ones and I agree with big cities with my reasons in following.
First of all, living in large towns provide adventure for persons and they confront every day with many happenings which provide an adventure life for them. Major cities with multi culture environment prepare fast, busy and unpredictable life since just some of people could bear this atmosphere. For example, we should admit a city like New York with twelve million population have many weird and bizarre issues for its residents in comparison with a small city’s habitants.
Secondly, there are many job opportunities and professional occupations in big cities as a precious item for these places. In urban spaces with low population jobs are very simple and similar because of simplicity and lack of modernity. Industrial life found in big cities need diverse professions with high abilities in contradiction with agricultural life in solitude situations. For instance in capital cities companies need business analyst with a vast knowledge area to investigate high competition market and track behavior of customer in order to improve profit.
Finally, shape of our life in big cities provides us suitable privacy which increase quality of life in this years. In small cities you should accept reviewing your personal relationships by your neighbors and in bad case if you do a bad thing you will be on spot but in opposite cities no one ask about you or be curious of private lifetime. For example you may want move in with your girlfriend in small city but you should be aware of neighbors watching you and your connections strongly.
In conclusion, expansion of cities changes many things in our contemporary era with many pro and cons. But I think developed cities is a vital environments for human being and progression for a nation because we can see best countries in the world at least have one large city and this is a necessary element for modern process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
... busy and unpredictable life since just some of people could bear this atmosphere. For example...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ivacy which increase quality of life in this years. In small cities you should accep...
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Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'environment'?
Suggestion: environment
...But I think developed cities is a vital environments for human being and progression for a n...
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Line 9, column 217, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'see the best'.
Suggestion: see the best
...progression for a nation because we can see best countries in the world at least have on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10695187166 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78205954293 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577540106952 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0358894847 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206812967085 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737612437229 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327246292616 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120110704926 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329683221361 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.