When faced with the decision of learning a foreign language in our own country or studying abroad, quite a few people deem that learning language will be more efficient and economical in our nation, but others, in contrast, believe studying in the country which the foreign language is spoken as the primer choice and that is my point. I will demonstrate my viewpoint by the following reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for studying abroad is that there will be a better language atmosphere abroad than our nation. For instance, the things we look in their country are all of using foreign languages such as the menu, billing board, and information of products, which can greatly improve our vocabulary and language sense. When we read the newspaper or web passages, we would get more confidence to face them and understand the meaning that these articles want to convey to people.
Another reason can be seen by everyone is that learning language in the country in which it is spoken can have more opportunities to chat with natives. In my opinion, it is critical for us because the aim of learning a language is having a conversation with people in other countries and convey our ideas we want to express. For example, when I was a student at the University of Jiang Su, I made many foreign friends who studied in our school by entering the English club. During the period of contact with them, not only increased my oral speaking but opened the door of my study abroad dream, I wanted to learn their language, learning more knowledge about their culture and broaden my horizons.
In addition, these reasons are also usable when we consider the possibilities of working in their country. It is because we have studied in their country so that we can better work abroad. I do not deny we could not have a good life if we work in our own country, I just want to convey the idea that we would get a broader platform and development space when we work abroad.
In a nutshell, if we go abroad to learn a foreign language not only can provide a better atmosphere than our own country, but the most thing is we can chat with the natives and learn many things we have not known. And I firmly convinced that the experience abroad can benefit our futures and profit the whole life.
- Working or doing graduate study 83
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 83
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 71
- TPO 5 integrated writing 90
- Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country others have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken Which is better Give the advantages of each and support your viewpoint 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63882063882 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51858931583 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464373464373 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1816675941 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.857142857 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0714285714 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322528257405 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123443416847 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108542872883 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207567272062 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934454520715 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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