In this day and age, we are facing a matter that everything surrounded us has developed to become easier and many of them made the society complex and hard to live.
To start with the technology, today lots of inventions have been entered into our life, for example, phones and computers despite these have lots of benefits in our life such as easy to communication, easy to work and easy to do any activity you want, expect is time-consuming.
As a student, the time is very important to study hard so, if you want to do that you must arrange your time with, study, play and to have entertainment for yourself. For example, when I was 12th grade it was important to take good marks to get a good university, so, I organized my time between the study and the entertainment.
And if you ask successful people about their secret they will tell you that it is important for you to plan and arrange your time. As they said " The time is like the sword if you do not cut it, it will cut you ", that means that if you do not organize your time and make a good plan for your next stage, the time will run and you did not do any work from your duties.
Also if you open the Internet and want to explore the world by it, you will find lots of websites are urging us to how plan our life by saying " The time management is success's secret".
At the end of this discussion, I think this topic is very important to discuss it and try to extend it, and I wish that all of us keep attention about the time and try to arrange our life, to become our life easier because the community is complex now, so we should be able to plan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...did not do any work from your duties. Also if you open the Internet and want to ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, i think, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24840764331 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40125699026 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490445859873 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4282784956 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.75 100.406767564 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.25 20.6045352989 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131440664924 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679530518793 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266311148687 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717341783575 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261125537646 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 11.7677419355 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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