Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
The Life will be better if there would be good transportation and shipping where people travelling and going to anywhere.There would be several reasons which given from myself.
First of all, different type of transportation vehicles which used by people or many companies.These are used for bringing products or anything to anybody whose want to has them.And some factories or communities use transportation for their materials or tools which using them for their comfort such as tablet,desk, computer etc.
Also, traditional transportation and early shipping are slow than their modern models.Nowadays, their effectiveness and functionalities are improved and rise for using by people.And their flexibility and productivity are better than before.That development gives to today's human better conditions, because they reach anything as soon as possible.
In addition, some people like travelling, for that they usually use different kind of approaches such as journey by bus,ship, train or any other thing.The most and the best modern type is shipping like cruises travelling.In the cruises, there are different funny places like swimming pool,gambling buttons, cinemas and other places where people want to be there.These activities raise persons positive senses.
In contrast, in the fastest transportation, products and tools would be collapse because workers of journey do bad impact to their carrying tools.And, if they do not enough concentrate their job there will be failure.So, owner's of tools feelings decrease to modern approach which given above.
In my opinion, although there is a disadvantage, there are several positive advantages.So, i think that modern methods of transportation and shipping make life better for everbody.Almost all person of our world think like me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, i think, in addition, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70260223048 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28272785222 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568773234201 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.1344086022 219% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2602024906 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 255.666666667 100.406767564 255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.8333333333 20.6045352989 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6666666667 5.45110844103 324% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212888218271 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111665110088 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062576053453 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111665110088 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062576053453 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 11.7677419355 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 58.1214874552 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.1575268817 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.67 10.9000537634 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 10.002688172 210% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.0537634409 195% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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