Money should be saved or should be spend
Money is the most important resource for all individual. In other words, there are many basic requirements which people have like food, cloth and shelter, but to fulfill this needs we should have enough amount of money without that we cannot meets our daily requirements. In my opinion, if you have money you should be satisfy with want you have rather than overspending them. I feel this way, which i will explain in following essay.
First of all, I feel that people should save money which they earn. We cannot say when we can face emergency in life. Even thought, you have more money you should only spend a handful amount ot fulfill the needs. For Instance, pervious early my sister was not well she was suffering from malaria, and we need to hospitalize her. As we belong to middle class family it becomes difficult for us to look for money every time. That time whatever savings we had was very helpful for us to redeem hospital bills. Whatever, may be the situation if you are rich or poor the value of money should be always understood by each individual. This example demonstrate the importance of money in your life.
Secondly, I think that if you have anything in abundant we don't have that much value compare to the thing which we don't have. So if you are rich people hardly have seriousness about how to spend them. It is true that we should spend money to fulfill our dream and ambition, but not on useless stuff. This can be illustrated with an example, in my office there are many women who always try to order online whenever a new collection of dress arises. I think they do so much shopping that for each day they can wear 5 dress at a time. So this is called unwanted spending. We should always buy and spend how much it is required because money which is save will have more benefits in future.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that money is important for each person let it be poor or rich. It will be helping anyone at any point of time. So think twice before you spend because, that would indirectly affect you in future. Whatever, may be the situation you don't need to ask people for help you can stand on your own. Therefore, money is most essential element in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'satisfied'?
Suggestion: satisfied
...pinion, if you have money you should be satisfy with want you have rather than overspen...
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Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...erspending them. I feel this way, which i will explain in following essay. First...
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Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (ot) must be used with a third-person verb: 'fulfills'.
Suggestion: fulfills
...u should only spend a handful amount ot fulfill the needs. For Instance, pervious early...
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Line 2, column 457, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...time. That time whatever savings we had was very helpful for us to redeem hospital ...
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Line 2, column 642, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'demonstrates'.
Suggestion: demonstrates
...rstood by each individual. This example demonstrate the importance of money in your life. ...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hat if you have anything in abundant we dont have that much value compare to the thi...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...uch value compare to the thing which we dont have. So if you are rich people hardly ...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ompare to the thing which we dont have. So if you are rich people hardly have serious...
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Line 3, column 677, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y which is save will have more benefits in future. In conclusion, I strongly believe tha...
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Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...cause, that would indirectly affect you in future. Whatever, may be the situation you don...
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Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ure. Whatever, may be the situation you dont need to ask people for help you can sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5125 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33124296246 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9372425856 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2083333333 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95833333333 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320740478024 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983382218745 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976410366221 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222640157981 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474992051095 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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