Food has become easier to prepare in today’s world. This change brings ease in people’s lives. The most advantage of ease in preparation of food is time saver. Although some people believe that there is negligible effect on people’s life, others believe that ease in preparation of food has prompted improvement and reform in people’s life. As far as I am concerned, ease in preparation of meal has major vital role in people’s life. I have explained my opinion in the following lines.
Firstly, there is lack of availability of recipe books and videos in the past or in an ancient times. But as the internet is readily available to any zone of a country, it brings out major change in people’s life. Moreover, nowadays, the internet is cheap and easily accessible to housewives or cheffs. Nowadays, women directly prefer to watch online recipe videos while preparing of food. It not only suggest step wise procedure to prepare meal but also plays an important role to serve tasty and delicious food.
Secondly, technology has made many significant advances in today’s world. Due to availability of mixers, smartphones, oven, grinding mills, automobiles, etc in nearly every house or kitchen, improved quality of food. For instance, mixers are readily available to near everly household to size reduction of vegetables or some other integradient. Also, grinding mills to make fine powder of grains has played very great role for time saving. Moreover, transportation of integradients to certain region or to export purpose through automobiles, increases efficiency and effectiveness of the food raw material availability. As compare to few decades ago, there were not any such instrument to prepare the best quality of food.
In addition, some ready made foods confirm great role in office workers. As they have very short time to prepare their breakfast and consume it, some food material can be prepared in very short time. For example, researchers have discovered noodles, toasts, breads, etc that may be prepared in two minutes. Toastmakers for toast, electric kettles serve major role to prepare toasts and noodles in very less time. Also, ease to consume and digestion.
In conclusion, as from above examples, we can see that ease in food preparation has major important role in improvement of people’s life. Since advance in technology delivered many useful and portable instruments to the world, technology has reformed individual’s life. Because of cheap availability of the internet and smartphones culinary experts can serve the best food in taste and look to their customers. Furthermore, some small equipment have important role in office workers to prepare food or breakfast in short time as soon as possible. Therefore, in this way, the change has improved people’s life.
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2399.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33111111111 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03010491608 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 771.3 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0593356688 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8518518519 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157758046862 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518154485874 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623495840472 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955161512622 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537104111545 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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