As the world is changing to be more hectic and complex, everyone should pay more attention to health. For this purpose, doing physical activities can be a good decision. In this regard, a lot of individuals incline on solitude exercises such as running or swimming. Others prefer to be in a group sport activity. Although both of these sides have several advantageous and disadvantageous, I, personally, support the first viewpoint due to several conspicuous reasons which will be elaborated as follows.
To begin with, individual sports are more flexible. Since people do not have to manage their time and schedules with others, they can easily do exercise whenever they want. Individuals can go running after work or school. Moreover, if a person does not interested in a particular physical activity, he/she can easily switch their exercise to another form without hesitate. An example can drive this notion dramatically home. I used to swim everyday morning. However, I realized that I had an allergy to pools’ water. Accordingly, I easily shifted it to another exercise and decided to ride a bicycle per hour every day. Individual exercise is more beneficial than group ones, and it is better for people to choose the solitude form for their health.
Furthermore, coaches can more concentrate on their students in individual exercise. It is crystal clear than focusing on a group of people is much harder than only a person. In this situation, coaches can easier find students mistakes and errors out and help them to fix it. Therefore, a person will realize its power and weak sooner. Moreover, in team sports, some nosy people distract coach attentions, which may cause to waste others’ time. Therefore, to stay healthy, it is better to be in lonely sports classes instead of group exercises, for it may distract coaches’ attention to promote individuals to do physical activities correctly.
All in all, to be in a healthy society, it is recommended to do exercises in solitude due to the fact that it is more flexible and accurate than team sports. I, totally support my idea which is revealed in the two previous paragraphs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
... school. Moreover, if a person does not interested in a particular physical activity, he/s...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wasting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wasting
...tract coach attentions, which may cause to waste others' time. Therefore, to stay h...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08732394366 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89447551283 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6335792341 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0909090909 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1363636364 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231859111342 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589982280663 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572083898142 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126895333877 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332635435019 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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