In this 21st century the spread of technology and internet has made our lives easier like never before. Internet is like the window through which we can see the whole world. So, in my opinion, I agree to the claim that use of internet has a positive effect on life in this modern era. I agree to this for 3 reasons.
To begin with, Internet is been used for myriad of things which makes human life faster, better and convenient. On a single click one can get plethora of information and use it for one’s use. For instance, these last 2 years are the perfect example of advent of internet. When lockdown hit and world was in complete debacle. Internet was used to be in touch with our relatives, check up on their health. In addition to this as my personal experience says, when I was not able to step outside, with the help of internet I learnt variety of courses and it boosted my knowledge in fields like technology and business.
Furthermore, now-a-days, online media and journalism has made possible to expose what’s underlying and common people are not aware of. Various scams, political issues are exposed and due to this people think twice before committing a crime or exploiting others. For example, recently on the social media and articles there was this scam exposed about a politician who was involved in various bribes for constructing illegal complex and buildings which was perilous for the society. This was possible because of anonymous sharing of information which was necessary for the people to know about.
Finally, internet provides variety of facilities like E-commerce, Online food ordering and many trivial things which we don’t have to waste our precious time for. With this facilities, one can buy everything with the use of e-commerce and order food online. This will help us to use our time productively for more important things. For instance, I saved lot of time when I started using internet for these activities, I was able to spend time with my family and share them about my life’s details and bond with them. Also, I had lot of time and used it productively by learning various new skills like cooking, painting and reading. All these things are important in one’s life and these things are only possible when you have ample of time for productive work.
So, I am wary about the situation that many people curse the internet because they think that it has made human life miserable and people are getting lazy. However, isn’t it one’s own decision how to use things effectively and for our well-being. People should acknowledge the good things and should benefit from it.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...political issues are exposed and due to this people think twice before committing a ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ve to waste our precious time for. With this facilities, one can buy everything with...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2185.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84478935698 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52650221753 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516629711752 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3907459082 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6086956522 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65217391304 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180625956939 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638949902857 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684501717287 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118270134885 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705983848262 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...political issues are exposed and due to this people think twice before committing a ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ve to waste our precious time for. With this facilities, one can buy everything with...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2185.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84478935698 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52650221753 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516629711752 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3907459082 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6086956522 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65217391304 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180625956939 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638949902857 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684501717287 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118270134885 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705983848262 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.