People attend college or university for many different reasons.(for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, by developing technologies, need to know knowledge is undeniable. The college or university is the easiest way to gain this knowledge. First of all, I think this need can be divided into three categories: First, need to finding a suitable job. Second, being able to use facilities which are created recently. Third, having a high degree from college or university can be a good background for people in the society.
The companies and employers usually receive many requests for job. The key factor that divides job seeker is education. Also, using modern facilities require some knowledge. This can be gained in college or university. Then, having high educations influence on other decisions, for example,marriage. It's almost an important factor for men and women to choose him/her suitable person.
Finally, I think the importance of mentioned reasons is not same for all people. some attend college or university for increasing their knowledge to find better job, some for knowing modern facilities and others for having better background.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , marriage
...nfluence on other decisions, for example,marriage. Its almost an important factor for men...
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Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... other decisions, for example,marriage. Its almost an important factor for men and ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'for example', 'i think', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271794871795 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.164102564103 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0923076923077 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0410256410256 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0205128205128 0.0685040099705 30% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.0820512820513 0.118717715034 69% => OK
Participles: 0.0615384615385 0.0351676179071 175% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9025899374 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0307692307692 0.0309702414327 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0974358974359 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0153846153846 0.0209618222197 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102564102564 0.0139019557991 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1055.0 2387.08602151 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 408.028673835 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27976190476 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.48200974243 80% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.422619047619 0.338922669872 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309523809524 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202380952381 0.174417080927 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.172619047619 0.112833075102 153% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9025899374 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 212.727598566 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654761904762 0.524397521467 125% => OK
Word variations: 64.5257704188 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 12.9230769231 20.5533526081 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4604338013 48.84282405 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1538461538 120.699889404 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9230769231 20.5533526081 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.644075263715 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.5376344086 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 43.8754578755 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.84090909091 1.45489161554 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325027334738 0.300154397459 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0478097075181 0.103427244359 46% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0482176481038 0.0752933317313 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.422531151307 0.497263757937 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140225731883 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109580690266 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813771165135 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291427184535 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0227627590402 0.067059652881 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241129133475 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655395465789 0.0618886996521 106% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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