Today, textile industry has come far and evolved so mush that there are a plethora of choices to choose from. People wear all kinds of clothes from casual to traditional to formal. It is natural to question, if by wearing different clothes, we behave differently. I belive that clothes do not influence the way people behave.
People wear their dresses for a long time, but they they cannot hide their true behavior for long durations.
If a model wears her uncomfotable dress for a long time, she would show some disappointment after a while. She can not always be graceful and elegant at all times. An employee dressed in his formals, is not serious for the entire woring day. He has good times with his colleagues in the office where he is not being formal. If you wear a suit for a bussiness meeting, then you are authoritative during the conference but when you are outside and meet a dear old friend, you are likely to extend a warm welcoming hug. This proves that though we may put up a facade when we dress a certain way, it is unlikely to endure for a long time.
It is not the case that all people who dress well are well behaved where as others are not.
There are many charlatans who disguise as a bussinessman and dupe people of there money. Their suits donot influence them to be responsible. There have been cases of fraudsters wearing lab coats to give the impression of a doctor, and give fake medicines to ill patients. Their lab coats donot make them sympathetic for the patients as a doctor is. On the other hand people who do not give much importance to clothes and grab the first thing from their wardrobe, are sometimes the most altruistic, intelligent, and confident. Their behavior is exemplary as they contribute to the betterment of out society. Monks who were clumsy clothes, disheveled scientist who are so engrossed in their work that they donot care about their dress and entrepreneurs who are more excited to present new ideas than their personality are exmaples of such people.
Thus I believe that clothes do not influence the way one behaves. People cannot stray from their true self for a long time. We all would like to befriend people who are not pretentious, and do give so much importance to clothes so as to change their behavior with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: they
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Suggestion: whereas
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...d do give so much importance to clothes so as to change their behavior with it.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202247191011 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.179775280899 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0988764044944 0.0866891130778 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0561797752809 0.046263068375 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.085393258427 0.0685040099705 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103370786517 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0179775280899 0.0351676179071 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57362291477 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0337078651685 0.0309702414327 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00449438202247 0.00188951952338 238% => OK
Determiners: 0.076404494382 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0134831460674 0.0209618222197 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0247191011236 0.0139019557991 178% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2287.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 406.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63300492611 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288177339901 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.206896551724 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14039408867 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0960591133005 0.112833075102 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57362291477 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527093596059 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.288464641 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4545454545 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9591214878 48.84282405 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.954545455 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 39.144200627 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.00699300699 1.45489161554 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281733404871 0.300154397459 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0935302024597 0.103427244359 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0687839076977 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493144044236 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192193317557 0.151897553556 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103375727364 0.114077575197 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100700848866 0.0781384742642 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.204499690858 0.336927656856 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.12069901241 0.067059652881 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17152413672 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108675883332 0.0618886996521 176% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.