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Sentence: Transportation facilities are always important for any countries development. whether it is private or public, that depends on each individual.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to countries and development
if he use train service
if he uses train service
the fumes of all the vehicles we are using is really cause some serious health issues
the fumes of all the vehicles we are using really cause some serious health issues
If the government improve
If the government improves
we are not only reducing the air pollution, but it helps us to save a lot of money
Description: Not only...but also is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
if everybody use the public transportation facilities
if everybody uses the public transportation facilities
if everybody use the public transportation
if everybody uses the public transportation
not only health wise but also economically and socially.
Description: Not only...but also is not used properly.
Sentence: Sometimes he should wait in a long line to fill the gas and it is not even a pleaure situation.
Error: pleaure Suggestion: pleasure
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 327 350
No. of Characters: 1554 1500
No. of Different Words: 168 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.252 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.752 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.918 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.841 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.569 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.164 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5