The rules that the whole societies today expect to young people to follow and obey are too strict.
When it comes to various rules that young people have to follow, some people claim that those rules are too stringent , therefore stifling individuality . But others argue that rules are vital for the youngsters, and I am one of them.
In the family, young people must follow some rules made by parents. For example, many children are required to go back home immediately after school. Despite the strictness of the rule, it is not unnecessary considering the fact that children may encounter various unexpected dangers wandering in the street. Besides, I heard some of my friend complain that their parents ask them to save money. This complaint is even more unreasonable because all too often young people are impulsive buyers and family rules about saving money cannot be ignored . Family rules do not end up here. Probably some of us are asked to respect the old and cherish the young. This rule is also of vital importance for a harmonious family.
Schools and companies are also places where rules are miscellaneous . Take my school rules as an example. The first rule, and probably the most controversial rule, is that students must wear school uniforms. Some students hate this rule, for they believe the rule stifles their individuality. Nevertheless, there are good reasons for the rule: students in our school coming from different family backgrounds, which means we have students who are well-off and students who have to rely on school loans to finish schooling. Under this circumstance, it is not unreasonable that students are forced to wear school uniform. The abolition of the rule will lead to comparison among students, which may cause declining test scores and degradation of morality .
Last but not least, there are laws that young people have to obey for the sake of their well-being . Laws about legal drinking age are advantageous to young adults’ physical health. It is a common knowledge that drinking at an early age is detrimental: it may cause mental incapacity and excessive reliance on alcohol. Worse, some crimes are triggered by drinking excessively, for drunken people always lack rational thinking and are easily irritated.
From the above discussion I firmly believe that rules, no matter in family, schools or society, are necessary and should be obeyed by young people. Only rule-abiding citizens are capable of living a secure and prosperous life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20512820513 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76936743319 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6532111136 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2608695652 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9565217391 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5652173913 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255596354228 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775735384932 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736128787141 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154692032403 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715087140152 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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