Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
When it comes to the issue that whether celebrities deserve to have high salary, some people believe that it is logical famous person have high revenues. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following.
First and the most important reason is that celebrities make more job opportunities for others. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. Bill Gates, who is a famous person in IT areas, established Microsoft Company that thousands people now has worked there. In addition, this company has produced special software like Windows that plenty of programmers make applications with this platform. So, Bill Gates should have high revenue, because he has a crucial role in economic growth.
A further point we must consider is that famous people gain their reputation and elevated incomes because of working hard, special talent, or unique proficiency. Hence, their high revenues lead people to pay more attention on them and try to develop their abilities. I think that there is not a better instance than Cristiano Rolando, who was former football player for Manchester United. While his family was very poor, it did not impede him for having a great ambitious. He liked to be a best football player in the world, so he left home when he was a child, and travel others cities, which ad better condition for develop him skills. He endured many difficulties and never gave up reaching their aim. Eventually, he now is an outstanding athlete in football and a role model for millions of people any corner of the world. So, I believe that he deserve to have high revenue because of difficulties, which he tolerated.
Apart from points I made above, celebrities usually allocate a great part of their revenue for help others people. For example, Bill Gates devotes nearly ninety-nine percent of his assets to establish a Bill and Melinda Gates foundation, which is a charity organization. The mine aim of this foundation is to help people who live in Africa to possess the high level of healthy. Moreover, famous people use of their fame and incomes for attract people’s attention on important subjects like global warming, which is trouble crisis in new age and menace humans’ survival.
All above evidence supports this undeniable that celebrities are decent to receive high incomes because they make more occupations, encourage people to develop their talents, and participate in charity activity. Last but not least, I hope that famous people be aware more of their roles in the society and try to affect people positively.
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Essay evaluation report by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned the former point ...
^^
Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...aving a great ambitious. He liked to be a best football player in the world, so h...
^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y and try to affect people positively.
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'as for', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.146 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.038 0.046263068375 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.066 0.0685040099705 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.014 0.0351676179071 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.66099576588 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.024 0.0309702414327 77% => OK
Particles: 0.002 0.00188951952338 106% => OK
Determiners: 0.066 0.0887237588012 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.006 0.0209618222197 29% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.02 0.0139019557991 144% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2676.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 444.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02702702703 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398648648649 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277027027027 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15990990991 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103603603604 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66099576588 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545045045045 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 64.2287125337 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3043478261 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3914959754 48.84282405 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.347826087 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3043478261 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 47.0070505288 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.624 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20570139312 0.300154397459 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0831652154213 0.103427244359 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0438021886123 0.0752933317313 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.455863905377 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132044405843 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687098893938 0.114077575197 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513053655066 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.27074558005 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0439911205101 0.067059652881 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133126186781 0.210909579961 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427492189896 0.0618886996521 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned the former point ...
^^
Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...aving a great ambitious. He liked to be a best football player in the world, so h...
^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y and try to affect people positively.
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'as for', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.146 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.038 0.046263068375 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.066 0.0685040099705 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.014 0.0351676179071 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.66099576588 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.024 0.0309702414327 77% => OK
Particles: 0.002 0.00188951952338 106% => OK
Determiners: 0.066 0.0887237588012 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.006 0.0209618222197 29% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.02 0.0139019557991 144% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2676.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 444.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02702702703 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398648648649 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277027027027 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15990990991 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103603603604 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66099576588 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545045045045 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 64.2287125337 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3043478261 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3914959754 48.84282405 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.347826087 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3043478261 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 47.0070505288 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.624 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20570139312 0.300154397459 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0831652154213 0.103427244359 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0438021886123 0.0752933317313 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.455863905377 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132044405843 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687098893938 0.114077575197 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513053655066 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.27074558005 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0439911205101 0.067059652881 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133126186781 0.210909579961 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427492189896 0.0618886996521 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.