The quality of human life has improved greatly over the past few centuries, but Earth is being harmed more and more by human activity. As we develop our technolo- gy, we use more and more natural resources and cause more and more pollution. As our population grows, we destroy more and more natural areas in order to expand towns and cities. The Earth is being harmed, and this harms people as well.
We often act as if we have unlimited natural resources, but this isn't true. if we cut down too many trees to build houses and make paper, not all the trees will grow back.
if we catch too many fish, thefish population will get smaller and smaller. if we aren't careful about how we use our natural resources, we will lose many of them. We are already losing some.
We don't seem to pay attention to the amount of pollution human activity can cause. Our cars pollute the air. Our factories pollute both the air and the water. We ' throw our waste into rivers and streams. We act as if the air and water can clean them- selves up, but they can't.
As urban populations grow, the cities grow too, taking over more and more land. New houses, stores, and office buildings are built all the time. Land that was once forest orfarms is now parking lots and apartment buildings. We seem to act as if we have unlimited land, but we don't. We need toplan more carefully so that we use our limited land in the best way
possible.eople need to respect the Earth and try to preseroe it. If we don't, we will lose all the natural resources that we depend on for life. Then what will happen?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...e unlimited natural resources, but this isnt true. if we cut down too many trees to ...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... natural resources, but this isnt true. if we cut down too many trees to build hou...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...per, not all the trees will grow back. if we catch too many fish, thefish populat...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...opulation will get smaller and smaller. if we arent careful about how we use our n...
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Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...opulation will get smaller and smaller. if we arent careful about how we use our n...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ion will get smaller and smaller. if we arent careful about how we use our natural re...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...them. We are already losing some. We dont seem to pay attention to the amount of ...
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Line 6, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s pollute both the air and the water. We throw our waste into rivers and streams....
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Line 6, column 272, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ter can clean them- selves up, but they cant. As urban populations grow, the citi...
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Line 8, column 165, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'forested'.
Suggestion: forested
... built all the time. Land that was once forest orfarms is now parking lots and apartme...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ct as if we have unlimited land, but we dont. We need toplan more carefully so that ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... we use our limited land in the best way possible.eople need to respect the Earth...
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Suggestion: Possible
...se our limited land in the best way possible.eople need to respect the Earth and try...
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Line 10, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the Earth and try to preseroe it. If we dont, we will lose all the natural resources...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42465753425 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15933823255 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3575677015 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5238095238 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9047619048 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09523809524 5.45110844103 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0798633021402 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337329871028 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061311834718 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439946075491 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424143217353 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.