Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Preserving from earth is an important topic in all aspects of science. It is an only planet for human to live which has proper requirments. Som people believe that the earth being damaged by human activity. Others disagree. In my view, human are damaged it alot during recent years for two reasons.
First, it causes extreme climate change which we observe it clearly. The climate change consists of both increasing and declining the weather. When humans change the natural processes of the wolrld by their activites inventing for their convinience, result in changing the natural situation such as weather. For example, study shows that increasing number of factories which are good for humans but produce a lot of other materials that damage the earth. These materials could have affect the climate. Some part of the erath, espesialy north part faces with extreme increase in weather which cause to melting the snow. This added water to the oceans could be one important threat for human. However, in some other parts we observe severe winter where people wouldn't be able to continue living there. As you can see, human activities could be against themselves that one important effect is climate change.
Second, some valuable animals extinc because of this. If you do something for reach better life, you should pay attention about other creatures in the world too because you are responsible for them. All the creatures have signifacant effects on each other lives. For instance, When I was born in rural part of my country where has a beautiful nature that I have ever seen. I spent all of my childhood in farm and forest. I learned alot about animals and plants that caused me to know about my interest and help me in choosing my career in future. I remember that there were different kind of animals in various species that could feed from each other in a natural cycle. I had a visit from there after 20 years and I faced a very horrable scene. All of the farms ruined and big factories built instead that resulting in cutting the forest trees for their uses and the weather pollution. These changes creat sever situation for the animals which had neither place to live nor food and water to survive. So, many of them died and it again will show its effect on human life soon. This experience taught me, human activities could extinc animals.
In sum, human activityes damages world a lot. Not only does it cause extreme climate change but also it extinc anomals. I think human should pay mor attention about their activities and their effects on world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...s we observe severe winter where people wouldnt be able to continue living there. As yo...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...erest and help me in choosing my career in future. I remember that there were different k...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...elp me in choosing my career in future. I remember that there were different kind...
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...eed from each other in a natural cycle. I had a visit from there after 20 years a...
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Suggestion: thereafter
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...ears and I faced a very horrable scene. All of the farms ruined and big factories built in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82993197279 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32985004077 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541950113379 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1907660032 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0714285714 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82142857143 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207485532005 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062469253037 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797200657448 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154489076242 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731954627868 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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