The time we spend in the university is one of the most important periods in our lives. Definitly we will learn a lot of things which will help us later on with our future career. Some students might think that they shouldn't be obligated to attend classes, others might disagree. In my view, all students should be required to attend classes for two main reasons.
First, there are lot of difficult subjects that you can't understand by your self. Lectures and detailed explanation are imperative for better understanding of a subject. For example, few years ago when I was studying dentistry in Egypt. I remember that unintentionally have missed several classes of a subject called 'Fixed Prosthodontic part1', and that happened because I was very sick. I tried to read what I have missed by my self, but I couldn't comprehend any thing; so I decided to go ask the professor for his help. Fourtunatly, he was more than welcoming to do so. After he explained the topics for me; not only I was able to understand, In fact,I got an A plus with the subject. This experience taught me a lot about the significance of lectures.
Second, classes are important in our career development. For instance, few years ago, when I was attending biology class, I met a very good friend named Sara. Me and Sara got a long with each other very quickly and became best friends. Few years after that, she suggested if I could help her to run her dental clinic and if we could be business partners which of course I agreed on. As soon as I started running the clinic with her my life and career has changed completely. I was able to rent a bigger house and buy a fancy car. As you can see, attending lectures could expose you to the best opportunity that would help to improve your career.
On other hand, students who decided not attend the lectures, will definitly miss a lot of people who would have been a great chance for them to improve their career. For example, My brother Omar has taken all his classes online. Meanwhile he was working in a full time job that was far away from his major. It took Omar 10 years to graduate and he has never met any one from his major to guide him in how start looking for jobs from his field.
Least but not last, some people may oppose my opinion, others may not. Not only they it will help them to understand their classes but also develop their career. Every student should consider attending all his classes if he wanted to success in his future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...er. Some students might think that they shouldnt be obligated to attend classes, others ...
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Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... are lot of difficult subjects that you cant understand by your self. Lectures and d...
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Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ad what I have missed by my self, but I couldnt comprehend any thing; so I decided to g...
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Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...ed by my self, but I couldnt comprehend any thing; so I decided to go ask the professor f...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...t only I was able to understand, In fact,I got an A plus with the subject. This ex...
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Line 2, column 658, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'A' is left.
Suggestion: an; A
...I was able to understand, In fact,I got an A plus with the subject. This experience ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
... Omar has taken all his classes online. Meanwhile he was working in a full time job that...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...s online. Meanwhile he was working in a full time job that was far away from his major. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nwhile he was working in a full time job that was far away from his major. It too...
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Line 4, column 363, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
... years to graduate and he has never met any one from his major to guide him in how star...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in fact, of course, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50556792873 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47669881769 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536748329621 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4883574636 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8076923077 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2692307692 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19230769231 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228141947346 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592924305122 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060774273039 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131397600149 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657764315572 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.