Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are definitely indispensable qualities for people to achieve success. Some people say it is diligence the most important quality while others may consider intelligence one. In my opinion, among numerous vital qualities, I think being positive is the most crucial quality for people to achieve success.
First, being positive means always looking the bright side of an event. Even though you have confronted a setback, you have to consider it a precious lesson and find your disadvantages then correct them. If people cannot be positive and appreciate what failure brings to them, they can never realize their flaws and keep making the same mistake. For example, Roger Federer, the world number one Swiss professional tennis player. He is regarded the greatest of all time and has won over one hundred titles. However, such glory didn't come easily. There was a time he was suffering from not only the clash of younger players, but also his own back injury. People once thought he might retire sooner of later. But, instead of giving in, he considered this situation a tough yet a life-changing lesson. He had quit tournaments for half of a season to receive medical care as well as sharpen his techniques. A year later he came back with even more elegant play and reach his world number one short after.
Second, a positive attitude can give others decent impression; therefore, it helps you attract people to learn more about you. Socializing with people with great qualities is pleasant so if you process a positive attitude, people are glad to get along with you. During the process of socializing with others, you can have more insights into their specialties. The more people you know, the more resources and information you are offered from them. I remembered I almost failed a class in college. However, instead of blaming on how difficult that class was and shunning my responsibility, I decided to ask for help from friends. I told them I desired to do well and I showed my passion on this subject even though I've failed at first. My friends admired my attitude and they helped me to handle the upcoming make up exam. In the end, I successfully passed that class and I was grateful.
To sum up, being positive is the most vital quality for people to accomplish success in my opinion. looking from the bright side of things not only helps you reflect yourself, compelling you to do better, but also attract people who may be potentially beneficial in assisting you to achieve success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...one hundred titles. However, such glory didnt come easily. There was a time he was su...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... my passion on this subject even though Ive failed at first. My friends admired my ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...le to accomplish success in my opinion. looking from the bright side of things not only...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, you know, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88497652582 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62090962698 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565727699531 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0881210981 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.24 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.04 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11481973377 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308960982576 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374018067298 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079181586397 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295821615091 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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