In today’s modern world with incredible technological advances, people can prepare their own food easier than in the past. Some people still prefer eat in restaurants, although, more and more people are preferring stay at home and cooking their own food. In my opinion, I prefer prepare and eat food in my home, I think this way because a couple of reasons, and I will explore in the following essay.
First, when people prepare their own food, they know exactly what they are eating. The food prepared in our homes is healthy, therefore, it increases the life expectancy because of the decrease of diseases, especially in relation to the heart. Apart from, learn to cook is pretty fun, and the food prepared by ourselves is much tastier. For example, recently I try to cook rice, so I read some recipes and after some trials I was doing perfectly. When my girlfriend arrived in my house someday I astounded when I cooking to her.
Secondly, cooking our food is cheaper than eating at restaurants. Nowadays it is lacking money for the majority of people in the world, due to the fact of the economic crisis that surrounds us, the people go exclusively to restaurants in special moments like birthdays, graduation and so on. Furthermore, it is pretty gratifying when someone likes your food. I would like to start to cook earlier. Today I keep learning and cooking more and more.
Finally, eating in restaurants is good, however in some cases is healthy less and still expensive too. So, I prefer cooking my own food in my house, besides of, the food is more healthy and I can invite some people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...aurants, although, more and more people are preferring stay at home and cooking their own food...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fter some trials I was doing perfectly. When my girlfriend arrived in my house somed...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...ed in my house someday I astounded when I cooking to her. Secondly, cooking ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, apart from, for example, i think, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62828391008 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4670014335 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8666666667 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343314385294 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114033973126 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109628276291 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218358187046 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107514466131 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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