It goes without saying that a sundry of people there are who back the idea that eating in a restaurant is beneficial and helps to save time. However, I have personally subscribed to the view that cooking at home is more suitable. Of those sundries of reasons to be mentioned, healthiness and excitement are the facts that should be dwelled upon here.
The first and the most prominent reason that comes to my mind is that the meal which is served at a food stand is not healthy. Of course, never can anybody monitor all cooks of a restaurant and their cleanliness. Preparing his food at home, a person will be confident of the healthiness of his diet. My friend's experience is the best example of this concept. Jim works as an employee of a company which is adjacent to a big restaurant. He used to eat his launch at that restaurant in the light of long work hours. However, one day that he wanted to eat at that place like other days, he observed a cigarette's filter at his soup which was belonged to the chef. Jim left his habit to go to that place after that incident and started to prepare his own launch the night before his workday.
Secondly, life is full of opportunities to enjoy it appreciate it. On no account would anybody neglect the sense of being excited in the light of eating the meal which is cooked all by oneself. A person who makes his own food not only delights his work's result but also is motivated because of the sense of being a creative person. For example, my mother is a resigned person and she is involved with house issues. A few years ago, she was depressed owing to unemployment and it was hard for her to stay at home without doing anything. I bought a cooking tutorial book for her, she started to learn a lot of new delicious food receipts. She enjoyed spending most of her time in the kitchen for preparing our dinner. Consequently, the best approach for my mother to leave the depressed mood was cooking at home.
To put in the nutshell, I prefer to make my food at home. The meal that is prepared at home is not only healthy but also is a way to appreciate life. It is high time we said goodbye our bad belief that it is better to eat everywhere instead of home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 596, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a cigarette' or simply 'cigarettes'?
Suggestion: a cigarette; cigarettes
...that place like other days, he observed a cigarettes filter at his soup which was belonged t...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'appreciates'?
Suggestion: appreciates
...fe is full of opportunities to enjoy it appreciate it. On no account would anybody neglect...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36496350365 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48574889226 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513381995134 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2530989906 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5454545455 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6818181818 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271730686873 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075386142445 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688522143467 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166607365107 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634461522503 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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