Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
In the modern era, people have not only worked in office but they also engage in social life. This is controversial questions that work in start of the day or late in night. From my vantage point, I prefer wake up early morning and work at the day time because day environment good for work and spend time with family and friends.
Firstly, get up to early morning it is beneficial for my health and feel to me more energetic. After good night sleep in morning i take time for jogging and exercise it is maintain my healthier body then take breakfast and go to work this all schedule are crucial for my body. In morning environment, less stress and fresh therefore gives full attention to work. In science also conclude that in morning human brain is active. For example, i daily go to work in 8 am and return come in to 4 pm this is time good for me because i mentally active in day time. However, late work is not good for human health b because when he or she worked late night then they cannot take good sleep and if they wake late in day then mesh up the breakfast and lunch time. Late night work and inadequate sleep consequently, people not give concentration on work and full day feel sleepy.
Secondly, apart from our work responsibility every person have family and friend so how to give time to them when wake up late in day and work whole and night no body have free, all people go for sleep. I chances to complete my work in day time so i enjoy evening with my family and friends. After vigorous work i spend time with my friends it is time i feel relax and enjoy the time. In addition, I make stronger bond with my husband and children. i give attention on my child study and go for walking with my husband to make strong relationship. Also help to my mother in law in work at the home such as cooking, laundry, and cleaning. If i wake up late and working till night then how can i could manage my personal life.
In conclusion, as based on what was mentioned that health and social life is most significant in my life therefore i highly suggest that get up in early morning and work on day time it is helpful for our health and family life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...etic. After good night sleep in morning i take time for jogging and exercise it i...
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...ake time for jogging and exercise it is maintain my healthier body then take breakfast a...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...up late in day and work whole and night no body have free, all people go for sleep. I c...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'chance'
Suggestion: chance
...y have free, all people go for sleep. I chances to complete my work in day time so i en...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nces to complete my work in day time so i enjoy evening with my family and friend...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...family and friends. After vigorous work i spend time with my friends it is time i...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...i spend time with my friends it is time i feel relax and enjoy the time. In addit...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...nger bond with my husband and children. i give attention on my child study and go...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nger bond with my husband and children. i give attention on my child study and go...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...my husband to make strong relationship. Also help to my mother in law in work at the...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: mother-in-law
...ke strong relationship. Also help to my mother in law in work at the home such as cooking, la...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h as cooking, laundry, and cleaning. If i wake up late and working till night the...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ate and working till night then how can i could manage my personal life. In conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, apart from, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29339853301 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34415553872 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425427872861 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5167074934 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94444444444 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270795984937 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107378310365 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771462687654 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205263537569 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784953060302 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.