Travelling is the best way to explore yourself and enjoyment. Some people prefer to do travel alone other make a large group to go on tour. As far as I'M concerned, I would choose to go with friends. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, no one can deny that when we are with friend, we do more fun. We can crack funny joke on each other and laugh loudly and openly even on a small incident. For instance, two years ago I went Goa for a week with my classmates. We chose a personal car with seven seat and plenty of food and snacks and drinks. On the way we played a game and sing old songs and dance. After reaching the destination we took pics and I shared my feelings with my friend by sitting near the beach. In the evening we try street food and shared our bills. This was fun because all my friends were there with me. In contrast, when I was in high school, got selected for educational trip and went with other school's kids. I didn't know anyone and get bored that was worst experience for me to go without friends.
Secondly, Obviously, every time we choose new place to go and enjoy and to learn something new about that place. But sometimes we face unexpected difficulties on new places because we don't know about the place and local people. For instance, five years ago, when had to go USA for six months internship. I didn't know much about western culture and traffic rule and food. One day i went for some local food but someone stolen my purse. Then I called one of my friends and he helped me. I think if having friends with you is plus point for you because sometimes we feel we lost in this world , in new street. Having a part is always good choice to walk new new area.
Although some people love to walk alone and enjoy there own company. They deeply analyse the nature listen the chirping of birds and sometimes sit alone along the road side and lost in himself. Many introverted person search these alone places to walk and likes to talk themselve.
To sum up, although some people love to walk alone and enjoy their own compney. In my view going on tour with friends is great choice because its not only a fun but also it provide security.
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also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i feel, i think, in contrast, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31980906921 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1892905694 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546539379475 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3570600579 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.037037037 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5185185185 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142384652546 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455007439506 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084219470711 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110747095803 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108500004701 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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