Some people like to spend their money as soon as they earn it, while others think it is better to save their money for some time in the future. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Do not use memorized examples.
People’s attitude towards their earning may influence their life. Personally, I believe that saving the cash for later use is beneficial for individuals. I feel this way for three main reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, stored money will help people to handle some unpredictable emergencies. There are numbers of possible emergencies and perils in individuals’ life, some of which is unable to be predicted. Moreover, individuals may need certain extent of money in order to cope with these problems. Therefore, the possibility of handling the troubles successfully will increase if the individuals store cash for this type of use. For example, I had been saving specific portion of my salary until I undergo health issue of appendix last year. Then, I needed to spend nearly a thousand dollars in order to have doctors treat my ailment in a private hospital. Fortunately, I solved the problem readily because I had adequate amount of funds. If I had not saved money, I would have suffered from the disease because I would not have fees of treatment.
Secondly, some important plans and steps in life require enormous amount of money, which signifies that people can deal with these matters thanks to their storage. Many people attempt to do significant change in their life such as starting business, or improve their life by buying the private automobile and accommodation. However, in today’s life, these issues cannot be solved with just monthly earning. Hence, individuals should hoard their currency in order to solve these problems. If people keep expending their money regularly without saving, they cannot improve their life situation as easily as people with savings do.
Finally, individuals can take advantage on the interest rate if they save their money in private bank account. Every bank pays interest rate to account holders for letting bank save their money. Thereby, these people will earn additional earning by only saving their money without providing their own working. On the other hand, consuming the possible currency immediately has no additional earnings for the people.
In summation, I am of the opinion that saving money for future is advantageous for individuals. This is because the money they save will be useful in case of emergency, savings will facilitate big plans in a life, and interest rate is additional and effortless earning for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, i feel, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21573604061 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73393612028 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540609137056 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.267821441 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.4090909091 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327687140357 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995437450528 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655812378879 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192517078029 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332024395107 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.