When the government was asked to allocate more fund, they will come across with a problem which area will choose education or governmental protection. Some contend that the government should spend money on the education since it is the cornerstone of our societies without it we couldn't establish intelligent generations who benefit our nation in the long run. However, from my perspective and actual observation of the life makes me believe that the environment needs more subsidize because the environmental problems are the urgent concern when it comes to deterioration the human being health and many creatures living on earth. I will aptly substantiate my views below.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that clean environment has a significant impact on the human' health. If we take a mint to ponder over it, It is scientifically proven that many people nowadays no longer live extended life in place, which has many industrial factories. These factories emerge tremendous amount of pollutants in our atmosphere leading to enhancing of acid rains, and increases the concentration of the carbon dioxide and decreased the fraction of the pure oxygen in the air. This contributes to evolving of a myriad of diseases throughout the society. So, If government sponsors programs to confine releasing the pollutants which have been produced by factories, people will now no struggle from illnesses than they do nowadays. Therefore, they will be healthier and able to work hard that will improve their productivity which returns directly to improving the economy of that society. For example, In the USA the government establish a law to protect the environment from any damage which required any factories that emit any pollutants to our an atmosphere pay a fine. I wish that will happen in all the countries. From what mentioned, confined the environmental issues will improve the quality of the people's life.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance is that our place is not the only habitat for human but also for plant, species. We have to care about our ecosystem since our lives cannot go through without them. So, If our environment is not clean, that will affect indirectly on us since many species will die and the plant's life will be deteriorated. What is more, the human activities have a role in destroying our environment such as overfishing and deforesting the forest which leads to extinction of many species that we depend on it in our lives. I vividly remember an article in New York Time of USA which stated that deforestation of the forest in North Carolina says in the USA made possible extinction of particular species of the chip-monkey and had a significant impact on many species that we rely on them. So, the government should build a park to avoid this disaster that is why supporting the environment needs more many.
The last but not the least, Supporting the government to solve environmental issues will open window to do a variety of research that will contribute significantly to improve many areas. Let 's say the government tries to create much-advanced stuff for the factories to decrease producing emissions and encourages people to avoid destroying their planet by improving their awareness of protecting their environment that will ameliorate a variety of fields such as education and technology and science.
As all things considered, The environment is a matter of life and death for many people. The consequences of environmental degradation not only hit close to home but also affect human beings all over the world. So, we have to do something to preserve it.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.0286738351 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.0752688172 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3045.0 1977.66487455 154% => OK
No of words: 598.0 407.700716846 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09197324415 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94510247834 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95979488983 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496655518395 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 961.2 618.680645161 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5806533259 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.875 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134672243211 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374338286264 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324181461039 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081435615375 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281366794027 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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