Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone.
Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Ahh! When it comes to travelling, I always prefer to travel alone, there are multitude of reason for this nature, it basically depends upon
my personality, even during my professional life, I am kind of a lone wolf. I want to do everything by myself independent of others interference.
Firstly, in today's world there are lot of hassle, we have to deal with lot of people, like, during our office time, when we commute,
it's like, we are too much ingrained in this society, we are always surrounded my people. Travelling is the thing that takes my away from this hassle of social life,
and while travelling I prefer complete solitude, I don't want anyone to disturb me during this time, I want to explore everything by myself, alone.
Travelling alone will help me connect with myself, explore my inner self and see where I am heading in this life. It will also help me
to cope up with any challenges and difficult situation by myself, it will help me prepare for difficult challenges which I may encounter in future.
Secondly, I have a nature of being doing everything independently, I don't want to depend upon other for anything, this particular trait of my nature also reflects on how I want to travel.
I don't want to depend upon on mood of other people. Once, I went on a trip to some coastal area in India with one of my friend, a lazy introvert, miser kind of personality. That guy completely ruined my trip,
whenever I was like, let's go to beach and grab a beer, he was like, I don't drink. In everything he had some excuses, from that day I thought, I will travel alone and explore everything by myself, whatever challenges I may encounter.
So, having a nature of doing everything by myself, a strong desire for inner peace, and a bad experience with my friends, made me to have a nature to travel alone.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.172413793103 0.229887763892 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.183023872679 0.158761421928 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0477453580902 0.0866891130778 55% => OK
Adverbs: 0.053050397878 0.046263068375 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.132625994695 0.0685040099705 194% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.124668435013 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.026525198939 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68461698426 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0371352785146 0.0309702414327 120% => OK
Particles: 0.0026525198939 0.00188951952338 140% => OK
Determiners: 0.0557029177719 0.0887237588012 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0159151193634 0.0209618222197 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0212201591512 0.0139019557991 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1825.0 2387.08602151 76% => OK
No of words: 328.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56402439024 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30487804878 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204268292683 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137195121951 0.174417080927 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106707317073 0.112833075102 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68461698426 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496951219512 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 50.8334428697 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 25.2307692308 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4493796898 48.84282405 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.384615385 120.699889404 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.644075263715 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.5376344086 242% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 45.6575984991 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 0.877697841727 1.45489161554 60% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280872535667 0.300154397459 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142320367569 0.103427244359 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.121526655741 0.0752933317313 161% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.716361515412 0.497263757937 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.249634896243 0.151897553556 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116040855829 0.114077575197 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510106364437 0.0781384742642 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.145955379291 0.336927656856 43% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.083730538626 0.067059652881 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130087553936 0.210909579961 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567294415534 0.0618886996521 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 13.6433691756 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.