Teacher is a person who not only imparts knowledge to their students, but also teaches them positive values. Some experts point out that teachers were more appreciated and valued in the past than they were nowaday. As far as I'm concerned, I disagree with this statement.
Firstly, it is convenient for students to acquire good education from famous teachers. With the development of technology, the Internet has changed everyone's life. Today, it is easier for students who are willing to learn knowledge of specific field to get such resources. For example, my friend Eric is interested in Computer Science. In the past, he might have no way to learn C programming language by himself. But today, he can easily sign up such a course on the Coursera and learn from professors who teach in Stanford University. He can keep pace with other students to watch class videos and accomplish assignments. In other words, the Internet gives these professors chance to spread their ideas, makes them more influential and be respected by students all over the world.
Secondly, parents pay more attention to their children's education. It leads them appreciate teachers. As you know, compared with the past, social competition has been more drastic. Companies need employees who are skillful and experienced. So, parents hope their children to have plenty expertise and be competent enough to hunt for a well-paid job. That means children should study well, and then they will be adopted by a famous university. This process should be supervised by teachers every day. With the assistance of teachers, children will learn well in a good circumstace. Thus, parents respect teachers to receive some feedback from them.
Thirdly, teachers are high-qualitative. In the past, teachers had no opportunities to study abroad. And without the Internet, their materials were limited as well. Knowledge is changing every day, but these outdated materials didn't change anymore. What they teach may have some mistakes. However, today, teachers have more chances to communicate with other experienced professors. They can learn from each other, and improve their level at the same time. With the improvement of their level, their status are elevated, too.
These reasons display that teacher is a valued job nowadays. They use their efforts to educate students. I believe this is an appreciated career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, you know, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25130890052 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76441773751 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575916230366 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1362998972 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.7096774194 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3225806452 20.6045352989 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.45161290323 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243749963214 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602212346958 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976431216511 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157889372898 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975516695988 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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