When it comes to traveling abroad,I always feel both sense of excitement and nervousness due to imaging how interesting the journey will be and what unpredictable adventures will wait for me.To avoid any trouble, the following suggestions are my ways to deal with traveling and are also practical to those people that going to visit my country.
The first piece of advice is that checking out the weather and preparing equipment.It is frustrating when you finally arrive at the other side of the world only to find out your baggage filled up with stuffs and clothes that aren’t suitable for the weather. No matter in which seasons you are going to visit Taiwan, it’s always wet and moist. Thus, bear in mind to bring the raining equipment such as umbrellas or raincoats with you. In addition, if you’re going to visit Taiwan in summer, you’d better be aware of irritating obstructions like typhoon that will probably ruin your trip.
Doing researches as much as possible in advance is my second advice. The best way to prevent any wasting of your time is being familiar with the country you visit. Once you have the information of specific tourist attractions, you can save a lot of time from getting lost in a strange place with anxiety. Beside, good researches will also help you to know the culture of an ethnic which decreasing the risks of being impolite to locals.
As for my last suggestion, I prefer self-help traveling rather than traveling with a group. Taiwan is an astounding beautiful small island with different cultural sites as well as night markets, friendly people. If you don’t want to miss any of these, I recommend that self-help traveling is the best choice to realize it and experience the real life in Taiwan.
To summarize, keep in mind to check out the weather, doing researches in advance and self-help traveling are the shortest paths to having an unforgettable journey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, thus, well, as for, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01834862385 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73199996448 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593272171254 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9785904601 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203028689376 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633193943759 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484245923597 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968977095773 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047345333502 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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