There are myriad factors or considerations which take into that having a focus on only one skill is less successful than having different skills. As far as I concerned according to the following reason and from my personal experiences, I am of the conviction that having multiple skill is successful than a focus on a single one skill. Someone concisely wight the pros and cons of each the reason will be explored in the following essay.
The first exquisite reason which gives adherences to my viewpoint with the example is when people have many different skill or develop many different skill they have open more then one option for them self if someone has only one skill or develop only one skill he will be limited in is his life my experiences is the best example for this when I was in the company I can work in more than one language of computer I can work in Java and Python so I am not limited to my work which many of my employes is with the help of knowing two different languages I did more than one project that helps me getting promotion much faster than my coworker because I can do more project than them.
Apart, from the fact mention above one should consider another subtle point pertaining to obtain with huge experiences
The noteworthy refreshing statistic revealed by a recent social research conduct in my country in which majority of people agree with the fact that having developed many different skills is helpful than having focus in only one skill as this gives them more freedom in work, to shade light in this issue according to the research done in Delhi University people with more than on skill is more happy than people with only one skill because they have more than one way to do work and if there one work closed or not having profit they can switch there work as they or not completely rely on one skill.
Admittedly, someone can justification to another side that if people have more than one skill they will end up having many skill but nun of them can use with there full potential because of they learn little about them, and if someone focuses on only one skill they can use full of that skill and they do not have to worry about other skills as they became master in one skill but I still affirmed the fact that having more then one skill development is can help more success.
In summary, by all the aforementioned above one should consider that develop many different skills are more successful than people who just focus on only one skill.
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...ople who just focus on only one skill.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, then, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55111111111 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35623051127 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.1344086022 318% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 247.510131724 48.9658058833 505% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.571428571 100.406767564 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.2857142857 20.6045352989 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475536823051 0.236089414692 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.27971221366 0.076458572812 366% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150276141998 0.0737576698707 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302347868902 0.150856017488 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152238248157 0.0645574589148 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.1 11.7677419355 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.98 58.1214874552 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.1575268817 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.0 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.0537634409 275% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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