TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso

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students should learn several things from school...
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...should learn several things from schools , colleges , or their universities . so ,...
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...hools , colleges , or their universities . so , learning the most of their knowled...
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...in the universities because of this fact . government should spend a lot of money ...
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...the universities because of this fact . government should spend a lot of money to prepare ...
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...lot of money to prepare these facilities . there are different ways for educati...
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... money to prepare these facilities . there are different ways for educating studen...
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... ways for educating students in colleges , scientists and psychologists say people...
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...ed to improve themselves in many aspects . because people have a lot of problems a...
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...to improve themselves in many aspects . because people have a lot of problems and their...
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... of problems and their minds are so busy .so , they cant focus on their difficulti...
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...problems and their minds are so busy .so , they cant focus on their difficulties a...
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... and their minds are so busy .so , they cant focus on their difficulties and it caus...
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...it causes bother them and other people. also , doing several activities cause be rel...
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...auses bother them and other people. also , doing several activities cause be relax...
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...cause be relax and happier than before. n addition to , students will have more s...
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...x and happier than before. n addition to , students will have more self confidence...
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...students will have more self confidence then they can more concentrate on their less...
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...ey can more concentrate on their lessons . for example , a few years ago a group o...
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...can more concentrate on their lessons . for example , a few years ago a group of ps...
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...ncentrate on their lessons . for example , a few years ago a group of psychologist...
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...a few years ago a group of psychologists chose different students of a college an...
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... divided them to two groups ; one group didnt have extra activity and they just studi...
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... had extra time for doing sports and fun . after six months the researchers found ...
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...d extra time for doing sports and fun . after six months the researchers found out th...
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...ks and they felt better about themselves , moreover , they enthusiasted to do the ...
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... felt better about themselves , moreover , they enthusiasted to do the other extra...
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... enthusiasted to do the other extra work . the other positive point of spendin...
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...iasted to do the other extra work . the other positive point of spending money ...
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...about to know more about their abilities . because the most of students dont know ...
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Suggestion: Because
...ut to know more about their abilities . because the most of students dont know about th...
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...ut to know more about their abilities . because the most of students dont know about th...
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Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...ore about their abilities . because the most of students dont know about their skills until invo...
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...bilities . because the most of students dont know about their skills until involve t...
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...ow about their skills until involve them . in addition to , some students dont bel...
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...about their skills until involve them . in addition to , some students dont believ...
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...ills until involve them . in addition to , some students dont believe themselves f...
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...e them . in addition to , some students dont believe themselves for exercising speci...
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...themselves for exercising specific sport . for instance , one of my friends loved ...
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...mselves for exercising specific sport . for instance , one of my friends loved to p...
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...exercising specific sport . for instance , one of my friends loved to play volleyb...
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...friends loved to play volleyball but he didnt try at all . one day one of his friends...
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... play volleyball but he didnt try at all . one day one of his friends injured duri...
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...ay volleyball but he didnt try at all . one day one of his friends injured during e...
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... part instead of him in that competition . after the game , coach said that you ar...
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...rt instead of him in that competition . after the game , coach said that you are real...
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...him in that competition . after the game , coach said that you are really good pla...
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...layer and im glad to have you in my team . after this experience he tried to be o...
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...r and im glad to have you in my team . after this experience he tried to be one of t...
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... years later he invited to national team . if the college didnt spend money on ext...
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...idnt spend money on extra activities he wouldnt be a good player . finally , its bet...
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...a activities he wouldnt be a good player . finally , its better to pay money fo...
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...vities he wouldnt be a good player . finally , its better to pay money for doing ext...
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...or doing extra activities such as social , sport and the others because people nee...
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...port and the others because people need a relax mind to have the best society . so , I ...
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...ed a relax mind to have the best society . so , I agree with this statement .
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...relax mind to have the best society . so , I agree with this statement .
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...ciety . so , I agree with this statement .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87005649718 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57466873986 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531073446328 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6829347716 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7368421053 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 66.0 5.5376344086 1192% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102782150868 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379141642754 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378052000255 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788604357437 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388089513193 0.0645574589148 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.