There has been debate about the importance of sports at universities and colleges as classes and libraries .I agree with the statement and i feel sports is importance for children mainly for two reasons which i will explore in the following paragraph.
First, nowadays sports is regarded as the important part of human life.Specially it is essential for growing children to be more fit and healthy.Sports makes children active and energetic.It keeps their mind fresh and make them enthusiastic.When they are given some times to play they will be motivated themselves for their studies.They will be able to cope with success and failure and be courageous.
Second,sports is the best means to keep friendly relationship with different countries in the world.These days many games such as football,volleyball,cricket,hockey etc has united people of different countries.Not only this its helps to give identity of the country through out the world.Best players are recognized for ever with honour and respect.They will be provided with high payment for their great contribution in sports.
So,by this mainly two reasons sports is important in my opinion and universities and colleges should give equal importance and financial support for the overall physical,social and mental development of the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, thus, i feel, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57711442786 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.74434220023 2.67179642975 140% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.1344086022 248% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.6416253675 48.9658058833 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 280.25 100.406767564 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.25 20.6045352989 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.45110844103 294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174264699123 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127188066812 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820258913785 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127188066812 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820258913785 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.0 11.7677419355 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 58.1214874552 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.1575268817 224% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 10.9000537634 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.01818996416 128% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.0537634409 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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