Involvement in sports and social activities is important for any student in Universities and colleges for all-round development of him. But, in my opinion it's not necessary that sports and social activities should receive equal financial support as classes and libraries.
In universities and colleges there are many student's who are looking forward for research and development of the society in the mere future therefore, its quintessential that they get all the books in the libraries which could be helpful for them to gain knowledge. Admittedly, it is therefore necessary that the library is updated every month with the new material and books. Also, the library may provide the support to the studies of students if they provide Internet Connection to them which many students won't be able to afford thus, this would require more endorsements. On the other side the classes which take place in Universities must be practical-oriented which would provide immense knowledge to the student. Therefore, it is necessary that new equipment's and software are available to the students so that they get expose to it.
On the other hand it is not necessary that sports and social activities should receive equal financial support. Since, it may happen that the sports equipment's once purchased can be used for many years and so money can be saved on it. Nevertheless, sports and social activities do provide extra curricular activities to students to participate in and keep themselves fit and show-cast there talent. But, they do not require equal monetary support as that compared to classes and libraries.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218637992832 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.139784946237 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125448028674 0.0866891130778 145% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0430107526882 0.046263068375 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0609318996416 0.0685040099705 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114695340502 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0215053763441 0.0351676179071 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92924772608 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0358422939068 0.0309702414327 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0681003584229 0.0887237588012 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0358422939068 0.0209618222197 171% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0179211469534 0.0139019557991 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1614.0 2387.08602151 68% => OK
No of words: 259.0 408.028673835 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23166023166 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48200974243 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382239382239 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316602316602 0.251872472559 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216216216216 0.174417080927 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158301158301 0.112833075102 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92924772608 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482625482625 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.1067364454 59.2087087015 76% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6684587814 53% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5454545455 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7905478906 48.84282405 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.727272727 120.699889404 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.5376344086 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 55.2056862057 45.7405998639 121% => OK
Elegance: 1.45588235294 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342734510929 0.300154397459 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.166819641074 0.103427244359 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0693109163073 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.605768691953 0.497263757937 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0945190677729 0.151897553556 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185025304156 0.114077575197 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109526904895 0.0781384742642 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.281382800405 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0916224778267 0.067059652881 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308460648756 0.210909579961 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105841750486 0.0618886996521 171% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.