Truth can play a vital role in human's life style. It can help to avoid doing unwanted crime and find good friend that can help people in their crucial life time. Some people prefer to always telling the truth, no matter what kind of situation they engaged. But, there are some other people who prefer to balance the situation and take a decision in the appropriate time. From my point of view, It’s better for people to tell the truth in suitable situation and it’s good to have fibs in some rare times.
First, telling the truth is undeniable in some situation. In this places any change in honesty can hardly hit your relationships. For instance, when one of your closest friend is in relation with some criminals and evil-mined person which he doesn't have any aware nesses of his friend's personality, It's the best time to tell him the truth in a private place. Actually, that happened to me the time that my nearest friend was entrapped by some devil person. So after describing the person's behavior we decided to cut his relationship with those people who could ruin his life. as a result, in this case honesty is vital and can really help to your relationship.
Second, telling the truth must be avoided in some other situation. In this atmosphere the truth can deteriorate or cut your relationships according to the place that you are. For example, when one of your family member has taken a bad mark or failed in his exam, it’s not true to tell truth in the middle of family. For example, this happened to me around two years ago, the time that I was in my grandpa's house in the middle of my family. Suddenly my cousin entered into the house and with a trembling voice noticed me about the exam's result. and that was the reason that I cut my relationship with him because I thought that he wanted to humiliate me in the front of my family. So telling the truth in some situation can shorten your relationship.
In sum, be honesty or tell some fibs can be two solutions that every person might adopt. but it's better to consider them in a suitable situation. Actually truth may not be a good solution. I think it’s better for people to avoid telling the truth in every situation because it can heart their friends and finally their relationships.
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- TPO 1, Integrated Writing 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, if, may, really, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62315270936 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4895386449 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463054187192 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5892200353 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3181818182 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796214893652 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279382756896 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308991337937 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516998764658 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373367986187 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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