Man has got many characteristics. Considering the fact that human being is known as social creature, many of the characteristics have a significant part in his success on the subject of his social life. These traits include honesty, faithfulness, and responsibility to name but a few. Some people believe that always telling the truth is recognized as the most important consideration in any relationship between individuals. Others, conversely, hold the opposite view. I am of the opinion that the first carries more weight. I feel this way for one reason which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, I strongly think that honesty refines or even purifies communities from adverse features of today's society such as deception, cheating, or unfaithfulness thereby contributing to consolidation in relationship between people. From my point of view, if only one attribute is considered to be crucial for a whole generation, what would be, without any little doubt, honesty. Within a family, the importance of truthfulness increases tenfold given the fact that naturally many of the parents' characteristics will be transcribed to their child and the offspring also most often is inclined to imitate their parents' behavior. When it comes to the communications and social affairs, it is evident that people normally tend to establish relations with people regarded as the ones who always tell the truth and needless to say are trusted. There would be no guarantee that individuals immediately trust others any longer, provided that only one case of not telling the truth surfaces. That is why I think it is very important to always tell the truth. To put it another way, people who are recognized as honest ones, tend to opt trusted individuals as their friends, spouse, or co-worker and reject those who cheat, swindle, or deceive others. As a result, unfaithful people gradually will be left alone. Actually, they will fail in both their private and public life.
To cut the long story short, I personally believe that always telling the truth provides people with good opportunities to succeed in their life in terms of finding good friends, marriage and landing a decent job.
By the way, when we can live our life with much greater ease by telling the truth and avoiding lie, why we make it more difficult on purpose by being dishonest?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, conversely, first, if, so, i feel, i think, such as, as a result, by the way, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09536082474 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94259361978 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582474226804 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 4.0 0.994623655914 402% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4303318994 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173619338159 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546059488798 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748275156992 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101064520453 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333110890093 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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