Any relationship requires commitment between two individuals. Commitment in terms of the trust, and care. Be it a relationship between child and parents, between siblings or two friends, truth is the base of it. Any person right from the birth interprets the meaning of relationship depending upon his or her intuition to rely on the other person. A newborn who is totally unaware of this materialistic world learns to rely on his parents to fulfill his basic needs of food. He knows whenever his parents will hear his cry, they will immediately run to serve his needs.
As the individual grows and starts to play outdoor, he learns to rely on his siblings to care for him. Gradually he starts making new friends once he trusts that they will help and care for him. Moving to the next phase of life, from school to college to job every person socializes with people who are truthful to him.
Although every person expects that every person related to him always conveys the truth. But sometimes, the circumstances might restrict them from doing so. I clearly, one of my college friends was not informed of her father's death over the phone. Because her mom was unsure if she will be able to cope with that shocking news over the phone. As a matter of fact, her mom sent the relatives to bring her home for her father's funeral telling her that her father is ill. Even in this situation, her reason to believe the relatives was based on the fact that she trusts them they always tell her the truth.
I strongly believe that being altruistic always pays off not only in relationships but also professionally. A person who is always truthful to the company and works hard accomplishes greater heights. I have personally witnessed that the employers always supports its honest employees and are flexible towards them in their needs and emergency situations.
To sum up, I can say truth is the backbone of any relationship and telling the truth should in everyone's moral principles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ith people who are truthful to him. Although every person expects that every person ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as a matter of fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79591836735 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62885830166 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539358600583 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0721821635 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5789473684 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57894736842 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129712536151 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454554455887 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043617393443 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804614803071 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368288728115 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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