TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are several considerations that people should regard in their life. The honesty is a good attribute, which individuals must have this characteristic in order to succeed in their career. This brings up an arguable question: Is telling the truth is an important thing to ponder in the any relationship? In my perspective, I agree with the stance that people should be honest in order to have a successful relation. The reasons behind this viewpoint are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, one thing that immediately comes to mind is that people can trust to one another. In fact, people in their relationship can tell a secret to their friends and wife, as they know that they will not reveal their secrets to others. Moreover, an honest person is more trustful in the predicament situation. Indeed, people can trust them when they are in the financial difficulties. For instance, consider a person who always tells lie about many things and subjects. If he wants monetary aids from his friend, his friend will not believe him and thereby he will not lend money to his friend to handle the problem. Therefore, honesty is of a paramount importance in the relationship between friends and people.
The second and important reason that support my standpoint is that individuals destroy their relationship, as they do not have fun time with each other. In fact, individuals who are honest do not need to argue about trivial topics, however, when someone in his relationship is not faithful, it is likely that they will have controversy. For, example, if a man tells a lie to his wife regarding where he was at night, they will probably have conflict to the other things. This will lead on that couple is not able to spend their leisure time with each other. They do not want to go cinema in order to watch movie. Consequently, this will result in that they do not enjoy their life. They intend to terminate their relationship due to having unpleasant time. As a result of this, they decide to get divorce. So, as you can see, the another consequences of not being honest in the relationship is that individuals' relations discontinue.
In conclusion, according to above-mentioned factors, I contend that one of the significant consideration is people's relation is being faithful because people trust to one another and their relation last more time. How individuals become satisfied with their relationship when they do not have honesty in the relation?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... discussed in the following paragraphs. To begin with, one thing that immediatel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94004796163 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8698333783 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491606714628 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5522836924 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5652173913 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1304347826 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137775925143 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473456770338 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457751986658 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088783077309 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026370977261 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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