We humans are social animals, we live in societies—a web of relationships. Relationships are very diverse. parent-child , teacher-student,boss-employee, friendship and even animosity is a relation. Truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Veracity builds trust, which is paramount in any relation. When we are truthful in our relation, the other person can count on us to always say what is on our mind. Over the time, the other person believes in our story without doubting us. Take for exaple this incident. A son was always truthful to his parents. Even in his childhood he did not resort to misrepresentaions for his foibles and always gave a true account of any incident to his parents. This made the parent-shild relationship strong. Even when the boy grew up, he never felt the need to lie. Unfortunately, he was once caught among a gang of narcotic drug dealers. He was arrested. His parents questioned him about the incident, to which he honestly admitted his innocence to this nightmare. As he was always truthful, his parents took him for his word and rescued him. For some parents, in todays world, it could be hard to belive the innocence of their teenage children who habitually lie. But the truth telling in this case has build trust among parents and their child.
Being honest promotes transparency in a relationship. If you are honest about your mistakes and admit when you have done something wrong, the other person can accept you for who you are. The other person can get to know you better if they know about your foibles or venial mistakes. If you keep hiding them, they might not like you for who you actually are but who you pretend to be. This is necessary for a long lasting relationship. Take for instance a boyfriend who is not honest about his habits and tries to hide his smoking or drinking habits. This realtion might not last for a long time as eventually the girl will find out about this. Where as if the man was truthful about his habits, he might find a partner who is tolerant of such habits. It would save the pain on both sides.
Thus in any relationship, truth is very important. Lasting relations are build on truth. On can not keep up the facade for a long time with his close ones. Truth will eventually catch up and it will hurt both the parties involved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parent-child
...nships. Relationships are very diverse. parent-child , teacher-student,boss-employee, friend...
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Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tionships are very diverse. parent-child , teacher-student,boss-employee, friendsh...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , boss-employee
... diverse. parent-child , teacher-student,boss-employee, friendship and even animosity is a rel...
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Line 5, column 645, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...ally the girl will find out about this. Where as if the man was truthful about his habit...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... would save the pain on both sides. Thus in any relationship, truth is very impo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'honestly', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.199561403509 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.149122807018 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0767543859649 0.0866891130778 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0548245614035 0.046263068375 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.107456140351 0.0685040099705 157% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107456140351 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0241228070175 0.0351676179071 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96644375353 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0241228070175 0.0309702414327 78% => OK
Particles: 0.00657894736842 0.00188951952338 348% => OK
Determiners: 0.0899122807018 0.0887237588012 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0263157894737 0.0209618222197 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0285087719298 0.0139019557991 205% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2333.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 408.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7181372549 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.28431372549 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208333333333 0.251872472559 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15931372549 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100490196078 0.112833075102 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96644375353 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512254901961 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.972155147 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6684587814 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.1612903226 20.5533526081 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.34561128 48.84282405 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2580645161 120.699889404 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1612903226 20.5533526081 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.225806451613 0.644075263715 35% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 33.9946236559 45.7405998639 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.06338028169 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298152053158 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121696066064 0.103427244359 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.112308219025 0.0752933317313 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.373129735291 0.497263757937 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129807589552 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949574318165 0.114077575197 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828630727645 0.0781384742642 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.224537981778 0.336927656856 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0543527002822 0.067059652881 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201886515957 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130644691954 0.0618886996521 21% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.