TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people agree that everyone in the world should tell the truth. In my opinion, I believe that telling the truth plays a pivotal role in any relationship. I feel this way for two main reason, which I explore in the following essay.
To begin with, The first important point that makes me hold this belief is that telling the truth makes people rely on each other and as a result, makes their relationship stronger. To be more specific, the relationship is between at least two people and continues as long as one of the parties does not create a situation that will break the trust. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. my a colleague from in my company, he would want to get the day off various reasons last year from our manager. one day when she said she couldn't come to work because she was sick, our manager saw her shopping in a mall. after this incident, our manager was felt very frustrated with her and fired her immediately because he couldn’t trust her anymore. he was unemployed for a long time, not only hurting herself but also her family. Therefore, telling the truth is always an indispensable part of our lives.
Furthermore, the second rationale why I advocate this point of view telling the lying is adverse effects on a person's mental health such as depression and axiety. lying is taxing both physically and emotionally because of increased stress and this situation can lead to depression or anxiety. More importantly, the more you lie, the easier it is to do it, and the bigger the lies get. these people assert that protect themselves in some way, which is to avoid shame, embarrassment, painful emotions, and to avoid being judged. Drawing from my own experience, when I high school, my close friend would tell white lies to everyone in the school. after a while, he has almost no friends left when it's revealed he's been lying. Afterward, he had to seek help from a psychologist and was even unable to attend school. Consequently, lying increases the distance between people, sometimes irreparably.
In conclusion, I do believe that telling the truth is always more important for our social lives and mental health. this is because these facts will eventually lead to a relief of stress and an increase in overall health
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, while, at least, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76962025316 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64438347827 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564556962025 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9102456774 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8095238095 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163200987338 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512830546263 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576105557896 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11791157012 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645125118688 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.