Humans make friends with whom they can share their interests and ask for help when times are difficult. As we grow we develops new interests and our living conditions changes so it is more important that we make new friends who can assist you with these changes in life.
Some people as they mature they will start to show interests in new areas that his friends may not share it. It can be case that the new interests may require friends assistance to pursue. For example, if you started to get interested in boxing you may need a boxer friend to pursue this interest otherwise you won't be able to excel in it. When similar situations occur we must find new friends with whom we could our passion.
Further more, as we pursue our dreams we may have to live in places far away from our old friends. It may be difficult to call your old for help at these places so it is important that we make friends closer to where we live.
In addition to that, some times our old friends may be a bad influence for us. For example, a drug addicts friends may be also drug addicts so he needs to change friends to escape from addictions. In those situations, we need to find new friends discarding old bad influence.
In short, as humans life goes on some aspects of life changes so it is important we make new friends that help you with this changes.
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-05 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.Use specific reasons and examples to suppo 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'develop'
Suggestion: develop
...when times are difficult. As we grow we develops new interests and our living conditions...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...erwise you wont be able to excel in it. When similar situations occur we must find n...
^^^^
Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... we make new friends that help you with this changes.
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208955223881 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.164179104478 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0858208955224 0.0866891130778 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0335820895522 0.046263068375 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.134328358209 0.0685040099705 196% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134328358209 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.00746268656716 0.0351676179071 21% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.2731264813 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.044776119403 0.0309702414327 145% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0485074626866 0.0887237588012 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0485074626866 0.0209618222197 231% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0223880597015 0.0139019557991 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1357.0 2387.08602151 57% => OK
No of words: 250.0 408.028673835 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.428 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.48200974243 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.264 0.338922669872 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.196 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.108 0.174417080927 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.076 0.112833075102 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2731264813 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492 0.524397521467 94% => OK
Word variations: 45.6877089081 59.2087087015 77% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8333333333 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8168305374 48.84282405 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.083333333 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 40.4333333333 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.05617977528 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329619380913 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151123482204 0.103427244359 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0733657777182 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.65531572674 0.497263757937 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162585654306 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156410826523 0.114077575197 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587713395471 0.0781384742642 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288803428866 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0997020767188 0.067059652881 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214493862398 0.210909579961 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376680221807 0.0618886996521 61% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
More about sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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