In my opinion if the car using will be decrease or not is a complex and multi-facial issue that depend on different social factors that some of them cause fewer cars be used but others factors cause more and more carse be in use.
First, by world development air pollution will increase more and more. On the other hand cars are the most problematic pollution sources which every years emisione a lot of dangerous gases into the air. These gases can destroy ozone layer and cause all creative damaged in the worst shape. Governments and Environmental agencies try to prevent this situation, certainly car using limitation will be a plane to do this. As we know government today also lay down rules such as Even and odd plan which allow cars owners to pass some streets only in even or odd days and they aren't allowable to enter all routs and direction all days in a weak certainly these rules will be tougher by air pollution increase in the next twenty years.
Second, in the past there were only a few models of cars and only wealthy people could have car but during time many other automobile vehicles have been emerged and will be more during future years by world developing more, people will used them and cars won't be only for wealthy family. In a comparison of percentage of cars which were used in the past with number of them in use today we can understand what will happen in the future. On the other hand in some country population and economy condition increase with a high rate as a result young population who have the most craze for car also will purchase more car.
Finally, against past today public transportation have developed and use of them is more economy and easier. For an example metro and plane are two transportation that is developing every days in more regien these vehicles transport a great population in a short time with less danger such most people prefer to use them instead of using their personal cars. Imagine twenty years later metro and plane will dominated the most parts of the world.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272486772487 0.229887763892 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.140211640212 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116402116402 0.0866891130778 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0608465608466 0.046263068375 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.026455026455 0.0685040099705 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116402116402 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.031746031746 0.0351676179071 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37933530325 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0132275132275 0.0309702414327 43% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0978835978836 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.031746031746 0.0209618222197 151% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185185185185 0.0139019557991 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2033.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 361.0 408.028673835 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63157894737 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.254847645429 0.338922669872 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.18836565097 0.251872472559 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12188365651 0.174417080927 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0886426592798 0.112833075102 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37933530325 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504155124654 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 53.5260824022 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0833333333 20.5533526081 146% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.899549358 48.84282405 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.416666667 120.699889404 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0833333333 20.5533526081 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.644075263715 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 48.9198984303 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.8488372093 1.45489161554 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312000004402 0.300154397459 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12686368308 0.103427244359 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0452844917404 0.0752933317313 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.572385672704 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193749077033 0.151897553556 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132048340765 0.114077575197 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497073679609 0.0781384742642 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.341258248539 0.336927656856 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0629373847088 0.067059652881 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213222219522 0.210909579961 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197922003719 0.0618886996521 32% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.