I believe, in the twenty years, the Speed acts as an important factor in transmission rather than costs and prices. The people in the future are not able to do maintenance and prefer relax status in comparison to these days. also, the technology will give special individual devices to the the people that is not similar to these trivial vehicles.
The first reason is time importance for people that live in twenty years later. Despite the fact that speed is an important characteristics in today transmission, these cars that we use today are not able to satisfy our growing requirement to the high speed transmission. For example, too many people in these days use airplanes and high speed railways to decrease their time. As a mater of fact, in the future, the time management acts an important rule in economic issues and the governments will improve their ability in this domain.
The second reason is the future shape of cities. In that times all the devices and technologies will prepare a calm and safe mean for the people that want to go to their destination. The trivial cars need more time in maintenance and are not efficient. In the future the people prefer a calm life rather than spend their time with the other trivial things. In fact, The more technology grows the less they spend their time in trivial things.
The last reason is the future shape of the individual vehicles. Due to the fact that, the technology is growing in unbelievable speed, The people have higher ability to invent professional structures. In addition, there are many ideas today that need advanced technology to be implemented. For instance, a vehicle that has ability to fly takes an important role in just science fiction movies today. I think, these opinions does not become true until new technology does appear. So that all the patents that proposed today will reshape future life.
In conclusion, Despite the fact that there are a lot of people that use cars as a primary vehicle, that can satisfy their daily requirement, in the future those will be concentrate on time and calmness in their life. In ten years, the city structures will be improved and the people does not need to use their individual vehicles and they are able to reach their destination with modern vehicles. Also, in the future the shape of individual vehicles is not similar to the one that we are using today.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268888888889 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.14 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0977777777778 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0333333333333 0.046263068375 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0355555555556 0.0685040099705 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113333333333 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0111111111111 0.0351676179071 32% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.5950202611 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355555555556 0.0309702414327 115% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.122222222222 0.0887237588012 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0155555555556 0.0209618222197 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155555555556 0.0139019557991 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2396.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 411.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8296836983 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313868613139 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214111922141 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.133819951338 0.174417080927 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102189781022 0.112833075102 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5950202611 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423357664234 0.524397521467 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.0853139711 59.2087087015 76% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5714285714 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0530969966 48.84282405 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.095238095 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 40.9826207855 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.8829787234 1.45489161554 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295702802436 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.15449724653 0.103427244359 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0949864772893 0.0752933317313 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568895463151 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133024956609 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134291518735 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588036879817 0.0781384742642 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.516886550048 0.336927656856 153% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0405097588373 0.067059652881 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227684734257 0.210909579961 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382499399464 0.0618886996521 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.